my rap made up on the spot

i am writing this song as i go along want to kill this pain shove my body down a drain wait for it to rain shove it under again in vain killing it before i go fucking insane my brain makes me burn just as i were to learn how to love myself and life it causes me strife..changes joy and love to despair im a brat when i say its unfair do i dare to admit im scared...
better stop or my boss will chop me into little bits...she told me not to cry because everyone suffers in life, on a daily basis, she said i might as well face it..life is a struggle..each day beings new trouble...but even feeling like shit i want to hit her and tell her its bullshit. she tells me the pain never goes away no point trying to stray might as well face the music and realise i will live with this every day hip hip hooray i might as well choke myself and pretend i slipped and fell

the end my friend

Wow, that's awesome! You really have that rhythm going...write another one!

:bravo: :goodjob2:

I am such a hater of rap (well not really, just this "gansta" and "hood" bullshit that is cranked out weekly and objectifies women lately), but I must say this is pretty well done. :)

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Originally posted by Joseph_Stalin
I am such a hater of rap (well not really, just this \"gansta\" and \"hood\" bullshit that is cranked out weekly and objectifies women lately)

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oh come on you know you love it.

TO THE WINDOW


TO THE WALL

Yo yo yo, this is wasup and I like to drink from cups, my mind is a total blup and I'm in the fo shizzle, later later my nizzle. Hanging in the dope drinking a shope and watching a soap. I like weed and wearing a bead. If you like to nead, talk to me...ad.

I'm a sick rapper too. Fo shizzle.

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Originally posted by Paperdoll EP


oh come on you know you love it.

TO THE WINDOW *


TO THE WALL

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SKEET SKEET SKEET!

Dave Chappelle's rendition of Lil' Jon is hilariousness to the max.