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      MARICA

      Marica

      Give me some task to do
      To distract my thoughts from you:
      One eye green,
      Faded jeans and one untied shoe.

      Always looking at yourself
      Each time you pass your reflection,
      Checking yourself for stray curls
      With every meticulous inspection.

      As you walk by me
      I watch you even more;
      You move just like water,
      Quenching a thirsty shore.

      I try not to stare,
      So I look at the floor.
      But something caught your eye:
      The mirror on your door.

      Perfidious circle of glass,
      Intended for self-admiration
      Has reflected two things just now -
      Your beauty and my humiliation:

      Two eyes of mossy brown
      Meet one eye green
      In the mirror of treachery
      I was caught admiring you.


      a/n: true story btw...quite embarassing .

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      Wow...that was amazing. COuldnt have captured such a simple, innocent moment more perfectly. I loved it.
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      ophelia..that was beautiful...im not a fan of poetry, but i liked that one a lot...do you mind if i save it for future reference? ill of course type it in the file that you wrote it

      Curiosity killed the cat but at least it didnt die an ignorant bastard

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      Aw, how nice. The thing for narcistic people, again then.

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      Wow, I remember you told me about this poem, it's really good You're so talented!
      You look like me, but you talk like a stranger...

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      That is amazing! I wish I could write poetry but the only things in that area of talent that I'm good at are music and... music
      Raised by: Ffx-Dreamz and readopted by Ophelia

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      Thanks ya'll for the feedback!

      Originally posted by nightowl
      ophelia..that was beautiful...im not a fan of poetry, but i liked that one a lot...do you mind if i save it for future reference? ill of course type it in the file that you wrote it
      Sure owl baby, no problem.

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      no problem "mummy"!
      Raised by: Ffx-Dreamz and readopted by Ophelia

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