Song about a lucid dream

This is a song I wrote for piano and voice based on an LD I had a few weeks ago. I kinda stole the melody from another song and tweeked it up a bit, but the arrangement and lyrics are by me. Here's a clip from the recording:

http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/opheliab...blue/Songs.html
click on The full version of "Belong"


Here's the text:

Belong

Silent sleep drifts over me
And dreaming turns to song.
I'm bound to tell our story -
That's where I belong.
When I see your face,
When I hear you laughing,
Sandalwood and sunlight,
Every ending a beginning.
The way I fell when I first saw your eyes -
That's where I belong.

As I dreamt of this story
I hoped you’d be along.
Green flew by in flames of glory -
That's where I belong.
A funny painted countryside
With mountains and a river wide,
My car died on a dirt road
You found me where the water flowed.
The way you held me underneath your sky –
That's where I belong.

When I hear your voice,
When I hear you laughing,
Sandalwood and sunlight,
Every ending a beginning.
That's the way it is, I don’t know why -
But that's where I belong.

you're so not a minidisk person! :rolllaugh:

anyway that was a really nice song! Was it a shared dream?

That is absolutely amazing! If you worked for a film company then that'd be a a film soundtrack!!!!! It's really that good! (actually it's better :D)

Oh and you so are a minidisk person :P

ROFL http://e.deviantart.com/emoticons/r/rofl.gif @ the "Im SO not a minidisk person"

Seriously: that was awesome! :goodjob2: . you've got a wonderful voice. I liked the josephine one. especially how you gave an explanation thing. Also loved how you went "uuuhh...i dunno, whatever" right in the middle of the song and how you narrated the page turn. XD. umm...and the "this is not the same as the beginning". plus narrating the B flat as well. Im sure there are more, but I REALLY liked it. Im going to save it on my computer to listen to if i ever feel down one day. For some reason your dream sorta sounds like a fairytale similar to that of Little Red Riding Hood.

Please make more if you can. I found that really entertaining. BTW did you just make up the lyrics as they went?

I think it kicks ass. The computer i'm using right now has REALLY shitty sound. But I can hear when I lean close, and what I hear I like. :)

Almost brought a :cry: to my eye. Ok maybe not. But I did like it.








Hmm...Minidisk... What does that mean?

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Originally posted by Dracco2.5
Hmm...Minidisk... What does that mean?

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http://www.bournemouth.ac.uk/academi...s/minidisc.JPG

Oddly enough, all I did was a google image search and that happens to be the EXACT player/recorder AND microphone that I use. Made by Sony.

you rock Ophelia! You have to do more songs like that! I just love them all!

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Originally posted by Lomebririon
I think it kicks ass. The computer i'm using right now has REALLY shitty sound. But I can hear when I lean close, and what I hear I like. :)

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:smitten: thanks man. Yeah, I'm gonna re-record it because I want to take the fluffy thing off the mic to make it clearer. Plus I think I have the volume too low when I transfer it from minidisc to computer.

Just boost the volume, the fluffy thing removes all the crappy staticy noises!

Wooo! Go Ophelia! Re-record it! (Just don't say "I'm so not a minidisk person" before you start)

Ok, it should sound better now:

http://www.angelfire.com/musicals/opheliab...blue/Songs.html
click on The full version of "Belong".

I didn't re-record it, I just uploaded it again with the volume up more. I'll probably re-record it and "Josephine" later. The clip is still from the old one, so it still sounds crap. But the full version is a bit clearer now I think.

I also added some of my opera to the site, for those who are just morbidly curious enough to hear my screamy side. ;)

That is a MUCH MUCH better volume! before I had to turn it up to full just to hear it :P

Go on Msn or something! I want to talk to you :(

The words were really good but for some reason i couldnt get the song to load. so...... i couldnt listen to it. :( Im sure it was great though! :D

I will be sure to listen to it, once i get home :)

You will love it if you listen to it! It's great!