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LOL. Just thought it was a cool name. Anyways, thought I'd post a few of my poems here. I get a few good ones in my journal every so often. Just thought you all would rather have them under one thread. Next post is a poem.
Oh, and any reviews/ constructive critism would be appreciated.
Thanks!
A little nervous about posting poems here, but enjoy.
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" My Mirrored Man "
When I saw you in that picture,
Not how I'd see you today.
Made me wonder about that man
Who looked at me that way.
That man is not the same
As I saw him in the past.
The mask that he now wears
Covers the smile that I saw last.
Now I look into his face,
And see his sense of pride,
It is then that I realize that
something in me died.
He is now a mirrored man,
A reflection, not real.
But something in his face
Hides the pain that I now feel.
But when I think in awe
At his joy that shines past through,
He is mine, my mirrored man.
That he knows is true.
And another nice little short poem I found.
Strangely enough, I wrote this in a car, lol.
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" Tinted Windows "
Tinted windows
So none can see
The things that happen
To none but me
Tinted windows
To block the light
A shade in the day
But nothing at night
Tinted windows
To keep all away
All day and night
Never to stray.
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Originally posted by pinkcheese
A little nervous about posting poems here, but enjoy.
I have a few books with a colaboration of the best poets and there poems. I will tell you this. HONESTLEY.
There is some damn good writing in this forum. I love this artist's corner. I have read more heart felt and talented work in this Forum than those books.
My mirrored man hit me. Hit me hard. It can apply to both genders.
write more. write more :!:
Awww...you're gonna make me cry!
It is only fair. your poem almost made me!Quote:
Originally posted by pinkcheese
Awww...you're gonna make me cry!
NO seriously. :morecrying: :arrow: :D LOL
Ah ha! Found another one. ( I love my journal! )
Oh, and about the "dreams" verse...I wasn't signed up for DV yet.
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"Promises"
Promises never to be broken,
Promises never to be kept.
The love you had speeding away
like dreams as you slept.
Keep reality close by,
Keep fear at bay.
For the wandering soul
can never stay.
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Originally posted by pinkcheese
Ah ha! Found another one. ( I love my journal! )
Oh, and about the \"dreams\" verse...I wasn't signed up for DV yet.
It is good you keep a journal. I wish I had the conviction to write in mine.
\"Promises\"
Promises never to be broken,
Promises never to be kept.
The love you had speeding away
like dreams as you slept.
Keep reality close by,
Keep fear at bay.
interesting comparison..... I will shut up now so others can reply :mrgreen:Quote:
Tinted windows
To keep all away
All day and night
Never to stray.[/b]
Yeah, I know, the verse is a little screwy, but leave me alone.
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"Pray for us sinners,"
The little boy cries.
But inside I scream
"He lies! He lies!"
He folds his hands neatly,
and sits up straight.
My heart cries out to him,
For no man knows his fate.
The world turned so slowly
For me on that day
When all seemed worthless,
The path far away.
His smile turned on me,
Like sunshine in fall.
Nothing more I want,
Nothing at all.
A frail hand in mine
Ahead lies the long dirt road
Together we'll ease the load.
With nothing behind us but
the sunshine in fall.