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      The Pinkcheese Files...

      LOL. Just thought it was a cool name. Anyways, thought I'd post a few of my poems here. I get a few good ones in my journal every so often. Just thought you all would rather have them under one thread. Next post is a poem.
      Oh, and any reviews/ constructive critism would be appreciated.
      Thanks!

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      " My Mirrored Man "

      A little nervous about posting poems here, but enjoy.
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      " My Mirrored Man "

      When I saw you in that picture,
      Not how I'd see you today.
      Made me wonder about that man
      Who looked at me that way.

      That man is not the same
      As I saw him in the past.
      The mask that he now wears
      Covers the smile that I saw last.

      Now I look into his face,
      And see his sense of pride,
      It is then that I realize that
      something in me died.

      He is now a mirrored man,
      A reflection, not real.
      But something in his face
      Hides the pain that I now feel.

      But when I think in awe
      At his joy that shines past through,
      He is mine, my mirrored man.
      That he knows is true.

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      "Tinted Windows"

      And another nice little short poem I found.
      Strangely enough, I wrote this in a car, lol.
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      " Tinted Windows "

      Tinted windows
      So none can see
      The things that happen
      To none but me

      Tinted windows
      To block the light
      A shade in the day
      But nothing at night

      Tinted windows
      To keep all away
      All day and night
      Never to stray.

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      Originally posted by pinkcheese
      A little nervous about posting poems here, but enjoy.
      = hogwash!!!!

      I have a few books with a colaboration of the best poets and there poems. I will tell you this. HONESTLEY.
      There is some damn good writing in this forum. I love this artist's corner. I have read more heart felt and talented work in this Forum than those books.

      My mirrored man hit me. Hit me hard. It can apply to both genders.

      write more. write more

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      Awww...you're gonna make me cry!

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      Originally posted by pinkcheese
      Awww...you're gonna make me cry!
      It is only fair. your poem almost made me!
      NO seriously. LOL

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      "Promises"

      Ah ha! Found another one. ( I love my journal! )
      Oh, and about the "dreams" verse...I wasn't signed up for DV yet.
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      "Promises"

      Promises never to be broken,
      Promises never to be kept.
      The love you had speeding away
      like dreams as you slept.
      Keep reality close by,
      Keep fear at bay.
      For the wandering soul
      can never stay.

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      Re: "Promises"

      Originally posted by pinkcheese
      Ah ha! Found another one. ( I love my journal! )
      Oh, and about the \"dreams\" verse...I wasn't signed up for DV yet.

      It is good you keep a journal. I wish I had the conviction to write in mine.

      \"Promises\"

      Promises never to be broken,
      Promises never to be kept.
      The love you had speeding away
      like dreams as you slept.
      Keep reality close by,
      Keep fear at bay.
      Tinted windows
      To keep all away
      All day and night
      Never to stray.[/b]
      interesting comparison..... I will shut up now so others can reply

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      "The Sunshine In Fall"

      Yeah, I know, the verse is a little screwy, but leave me alone.
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      "Pray for us sinners,"
      The little boy cries.
      But inside I scream
      "He lies! He lies!"

      He folds his hands neatly,
      and sits up straight.
      My heart cries out to him,
      For no man knows his fate.

      The world turned so slowly
      For me on that day
      When all seemed worthless,
      The path far away.

      His smile turned on me,
      Like sunshine in fall.
      Nothing more I want,
      Nothing at all.

      A frail hand in mine
      Ahead lies the long dirt road
      Together we'll ease the load.
      With nothing behind us but
      the sunshine in fall.

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