2 characters I made up

Right so, I just figured I'd post this here to see what others thing about them...

Ichigo Chidori
Age: 16
Height: 5'5"
Eye Color: Red
Hair Color: Pink
Gender: Female
Interesting stuff: Ichigo Chidori is a cat girl (surprise right?). She was born in a test lab as an experiment that somehow escaped. She doesn't remember where she came from, but every so often, she has dreams of herself killing people inside some facility. She doesn't know it, but she's an expert at swords play and gun weilding. She doesn't believe thats her because their just dreams, and she's really a very very nice person, and pretty shy too. But as she lives out her life, some really strange things start to happen, and then see starts to realize who she really is.
Ichigo is in high school. She has a small group of friends that she hangs out with. She's the only one of her kind, so there are some guys that try to hit on her, but she's not attracted to them...or any guy for that matter. She likes girls. There's one girl in particular that she's really interested in.
Whenever Ichigo gets nervous, like talking to the girl she likes, she starts to speak in Japanese, her native tounge.
Author's Notes: She is usually seen wearing a green and oranges stripped shirt. I believe the shirt makes her look a lot more cheerful and out going. Sometimes I picture her wearing a chain on her jeans, but then I wonder if that makes her seem too punk or something...

Lilium
Age: 16
Eye Color: Light-Blue
Hair Color: White
Gender: Female
Interesting Stuff: Lilium (Lily for short) is a normal girl living a normal life...until she meets Ichigo. Lilium is the girl that Ichigo is in love with. She's an average high school student who's very shy and doesn't hang out with anyone. Ichigo and Lilium usually bump into each other in the halls, but then she doesn't know what Ichigo is trying to say because she starts speaking in a different language. Lily doesn't know that Ichigo likes her.
Author's notes: Lilium is still an interesting character to me. Sometimes I picture her in a wheel chair, and then sometimes I don't. I can't really make a final decision on what to do with her. I also didn't give her a last name, as I can't think of one that fits her first name, and I have no plans to change her name.

What do you guys and girls think? I'd be awesome to actually write out a manga or book or something with these two characters...

I know there are a couple of people writing some stories around here, I wouldn't mind hearing their names somewhere :3

YES! :D

im glad you finnally got around to writing, i love the characters! i hope to see a story theyre in soon.

I would LOVE to see someone mention a name or something in a story of theirs!

I may also write out a couple of short stories or something involving them or any other character I can come up with.