broken wings

my wings are broken
help me find the pieces
i can not fly
let me fly once more

help me find the pieces
show me endless skys
let me fly once more
help me soar

show me endless skys
fly me into the sun set
help me soar
let me touch each star

let me touch each star
i can not fly
fly me into the sun set
my wings are broken

Wow...it sounds sort of like a sestina, was that what you were aiming for? Anyway, I can really feel the passion, the sadness...no BS!

:flyaway: :bravo: