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In dreams....
Well...while I have had limited lucid dreams, I write about the topic a lot..... I'm new here so figured this was a good intro....
In dreams I connect to the astral plane
And seems redirect to form a new domain
The theme I project with the chi of my brain
Until beams reflect and the image they maintain
Theres a hazy place between dream and consciousness
A void of subspace serene and evanesce
That eternally hovers there awaiting your manipulation
And internally ensnares its reality, unabating to your creation
To an inner mantra I laid and deeply meditated
Gracefully transfered to a scene completely replicated
from the pages of fairy worlds in my imagination
Where time disengages and whims bring adulation
Now in the tomb of a pharaoh I exist
And in the womb of a sparrow I entwist
Thoughts turn to pedals of an unfolding lotus
Vow to learn the rewards untold of focus
Suspended, in the vortex of this black hole
Weightless, realizing I play such a minor role
Lucidity, is taking over my dreams
Gather and disperse, then run in the beams.........................
........ and um... hi......
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Hi! :)
That was pretty cool. 8)
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i really enjoyed reading your above post :) very interesting poem.
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Nice poem ey ;)
I liked the 4th paragraph the most, very artistic. Write another one yeh?
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thanks for the replies..... the couple of poems I have posted are some older things I wrote a while ago, been kinda in a void for writing lately....... but um Xisdence, glad you liked the fourth paragraph.... some people get all bent out a shape bout the sparrows womb part.... not reality based enough for them I guess......
Thanks again guys :mrgreen: