a poemfrom a dream..or a dream from a poem?

[kaisersince1984]

i had a dream..which led me 2 write this poem, some parts are exaclty as my dream..n every time i read it..it gives me the same sense of 'being lost'..tht i felt while dreaming I woke up dead I woke up in the middle of the night To the sound of rainfall and thunder strikes And the unfinished dream That seemed to challenge my reality Left me to believe that my life’s been an abnormality And as I put my feet on the cold floor These paradoxical thoughts wash ashore Who am I and what’s the reason I’m here Will I be remembered or will I just disappear And as I get up, look in the mirror with despair If that person is me why don’t I recognize his stare And with my hollow eyes as I look into this abyss I start to realize the reason for my distress The dream I had left unfinished was for a reason I couldn’t face my life I couldn’t face its treason Because time will see no mercy, it just engulfs its path It never stood by anyone, those who stood against felt its wrath And this is where I come in, this is where I stand My life never was a mess, but I guess time had it all planned And with this disturbing realization I walk out the bedroom door I see my life in dull color I see the truth I had ignored All this money all this power All the innocence I've devoured Now I don't want to be a part of this Suddenly I've become a coward Because fame n fortune come with a price no doubt This price I’ll have to pay with my life no doubt Now I'm standing at the window looking at the world below the faded reflection in the window wants me to let it go So I take my last leap and my past flashes as I fell This reminiscence I fear more than death itself With a welcoming smile I met with death Finally I'm free, finally absolution I get I finished my dream, I woke up dead...

[Rozzy]

wow... that is very good. i personally lovee it. keep writing things like this, really. Good Job!!!