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      Pandora's Playground [poem]

      Tell me what you think, I'm going to make a thread with some older poetry, but this is my newest poem, just wrote it today.

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      Pandora’s Playground


      Strong winds make the grass shiver,
      Ripple the water as a leaf lands lightly.
      Moonlight reflects light off the river,
      And the fluorescent fireflies scatter brightly.
      Stars above transcend wisdom as they mirror
      The dream world with their ghostly outlined design.
      Clouds cover the night sky, all becomes clearer
      As rain trickles smoothly as if a fine red wine.
      Rinsing away the sinister, malevolent aura
      Enshrouding the dim, bloodstained blade
      Entrapped in the mangled moon Pandora,
      Resting in the lake that striking Maid.
      The clouds clear, her shadow disappears,
      Laughing above, the starry puppeteers.

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      any comments???

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      Refer to my post on your other thread... and try not to make a thread for each new poem.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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