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      Poems, Songs, and Other.

      The Sadist

      I've destroyed the barrier between man and animal.
      I've hurt, lied, stolen, cheated, I've done the harmful and harmless.
      I've denied the beliefs, and shunned the believers.
      I've harmed both myself and others, been both sadistic and masochistic.
      Cut myself for the pleasure of pain, hurt others for the pleasure of theirs.
      I've done drugs, and gotten high, lost friends for this reason.
      I've longed for somebody to help me, to bring me out. It never works. I've searched long and hard, but no longer believe. I'll still search, but not for long, for I need to see, to believe.

      I only have this for now because I destroyed all the rest when I got really mad....
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      I really enjoyed this! It's dark, it's moody, but not so metaphoric that it becomes unrelatable.

      Everyone has their share of sadism, whether they realize it at the time or not. It's those that get caught in that downward spiral of sadism and hit rockbottom, becoming too dizzy to get back on their feet and learn from whatever ordeal or whatever experience. Not everyone comes around.

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      "I've harmed both myself and others, been both sadistic and masochistic.
      Cut myself for the pleasure of pain, hurt others for the pleasure of theirs."


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      This one, I'm planning to rewrite

      Love the cutters
      Love the ones who bleed to be happy
      That hate themselves but don't dare show it
      Love the ones with a sense of style
      That hear you insults
      But just ignore it
      Love the cutters
      Who just ignore the haters
      Love the cutters
      Who simply forget the lovers
      Love the ones
      With the razor blades
      Love the cutters
      But never hate

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      Nobody cares

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      Nope.
      Not a soul.
      You might cut them.
      and it's taken it's toll.
      you've scared them away.
      they're gone for good.
      and to your dismay.
      it's brightened their mood.
      they're happy they're gone.
      away from your cries and whines
      they're happy they're gone
      feeling safe in their mind.
      you cannot hurt them.
      can't touch them at all.
      you can't destroy them.
      can't beckon and call.
      satan controls you.
      you sinner,
      you freak
      you cut open their hearts.
      their happiness begins to leak.
      but they've run away now.
      gone and hid.
      until the admins
      get rid of you, rid.
      and until this happens,
      their subconscious tugs.
      until this happens
      we are all fucked.
      Last edited by guitarboy; 12-10-2009 at 12:42 AM.

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      Your kind isn't wanted here.

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      Quote Originally Posted by TheLucid View Post
      Your kind isn't wanted here.

      Yes, you're not supposed to do that. and you can report it.

      Edit* by that I ment guitarboy, that person's not supposed to do that.
      Last edited by Gnossienne; 12-11-2009 at 03:10 PM.
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      Quote Originally Posted by Gnosienne View Post
      Yes, you're not supposed to do that. and you can report it.

      Edit* by that I me[a]nt guitarboy, that person's not supposed to do that.
      Duuuuuurrrr it's poems songs and other. I submitted poem, so

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      Quote Originally Posted by guitarboy View Post
      Duuuuuurrrr it's poems songs and other. I submitted poem, so
      HIS poems, songs and other.

      Quote Originally Posted by Xox
      * Critiques of submitted works should be kept in a positive and constructive manner.
      * If you're going to say something negative about someone's work, you should also try to provide why you think it's negative and in what ways it can be improved.
      * Blatant rudeness and unnecessarily harsh responses will not be tolerated, nor will assaults on someone's skill. Comments such as these will be deleted if a moderator or administrator deems it necessary.

      If someone responded to something I made in the way you did i'd be deeply offended so that's why i'm defending this kid.

      until the admins
      get rid of you, rid.
      and until this happens,
      their subconscious tugs.
      until this happens
      we are all fucked.
      You suggested that the admins would ban him for making a bad poem, wtf?
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      No, GuitarBoy just doesn't like me in general.

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      Quote Originally Posted by TheLucid View Post
      No, GuitarBoy just doesn't like me in general.
      I like everybody, just hate everyone.
      HIS poems, songs and other.
      Don't see that in the title
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      Originally Posted by Xox
      * Critiques of submitted works should be kept in a positive and constructive manner.
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      If someone responded to something I made in the way you did i'd be deeply offended so that's why i'm defending this kid.

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      and until this happens,
      their subconscious tugs.
      until this happens
      we are all fucked.
      You suggested that the admins would ban him for making a bad poem, wtf?
      who's to say I was talking about him, hmmmm?

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      Is this topic supposed to be only for your stuff, TheLucid, or are you asking others to share as well? Your title/post doesn't make it clear.

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      Mine, I kinda figured that was common sense, but then again GuitarBoy just sits at a computer trying to fail people and doesn't use that.

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      man o man TheLucid these are great poems, i like both. Anymore?

      "MementoMori, the lucid machine"

      "There's nothing better than knowing what it's like to fly like superman. Being fully aware of the air whipping by you, controlling every movement of every single atom in your body with a single thought. It's real freedom, and there's not a word good enough to describe it, so I'll just call it dreamy for now."

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      ... and i can't help it but this is hilariouse!

      "MementoMori, the lucid machine"

      "There's nothing better than knowing what it's like to fly like superman. Being fully aware of the air whipping by you, controlling every movement of every single atom in your body with a single thought. It's real freedom, and there's not a word good enough to describe it, so I'll just call it dreamy for now."

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      Quote Originally Posted by MementoMori View Post
      man o man TheLucid these are great poems, i like both. Anymore?
      I have more, I just need to find some good ones. Thanks

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      Liked the first one, don't particularly agree with the second one...but whatever.

      Quote Originally Posted by TheLucid View Post
      I kinda figured that was common sense
      You'd think that, however, common sense seems to be a character trait quite unwelcome 'round these parts...
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      Quote Originally Posted by Lzen View Post
      You'd think that, however, common sense seems to be a character trait quite unwelcome 'round these parts...
      This.

      *ahem*

      Peppers

      Peppers, peppers, of all kinds
      Spiciness that numbs the mind
      Intense pain of white hot heat
      To stomach a pepper is no easy feat

      Gates

      There once was a pirate named Gates
      Who went around town on roller skates
      He slipped on his cutlass
      Rend'ring him nutless
      And practically useless on dates.

      First is a quatrain, second is obviously a limerick. I like my poetry lighthearted and sometimes humorous.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Mario92 View Post
      This.

      *ahem*

      Peppers

      Peppers, peppers, of all kinds
      Spiciness that numbs the mind
      Intense pain of white hot heat
      To stomach a pepper is no easy feat

      Gates

      There once was a pirate named Gates
      Who went around town on roller skates
      He slipped on his cutlass
      Rend'ring him nutless
      And practically useless on dates.

      First is a quatrain, second is obviously a limerick. I like my poetry lighthearted and sometimes humorous.
      Grrrrreat stuff especially the second one lol

      "MementoMori, the lucid machine"

      "There's nothing better than knowing what it's like to fly like superman. Being fully aware of the air whipping by you, controlling every movement of every single atom in your body with a single thought. It's real freedom, and there's not a word good enough to describe it, so I'll just call it dreamy for now."

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      Quote Originally Posted by Mario92 View Post
      This.

      *ahem*

      Peppers

      Peppers, peppers, of all kinds
      Spiciness that numbs the mind
      Intense pain of white hot heat
      To stomach a pepper is no easy feat

      Gates

      There once was a pirate named Gates
      Who went around town on roller skates
      He slipped on his cutlass
      Rend'ring him nutless
      And practically useless on dates.

      First is a quatrain, second is obviously a limerick. I like my poetry lighthearted and sometimes humorous.
      Uhmm, that's good, but why are you posting it here??

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      Quote Originally Posted by TheLucid View Post
      Uhmm, that's good, but why are you posting it here??
      You do realize you never said "MY Poems, etc."

      I like
      Gates.
      Ow.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Mark75 View Post
      Is this topic supposed to be only for your stuff, TheLucid, or are you asking others to share as well? Your title/post doesn't make it clear.
      Quote Originally Posted by TheLucid View Post
      Mine, I kinda figured that was common sense, but then again GuitarBoy just sits at a computer trying to fail people and doesn't use that.
      Quote Originally Posted by guitarboy View Post
      You do realize you never said "MY Poems, etc."

      I like
      Gates.
      Ow.
      Wrong. Now stop being a baby. I deleted your post for a reason. Take a hint.

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      I don't believe that a mod should be calling any member a baby.
      Some people are more susceptible to pain/other feelings then other people are.
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      Quote Originally Posted by Gnosienne View Post
      I don't believe that a mod should be calling any member a baby.
      Some people are more susceptible to pain/other feelings then other people are.
      If the person actually is being a baby, I think it's alright.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Gnosienne View Post
      I don't believe that a mod should be calling any member a baby.
      Some people are more susceptible to pain/other feelings then other people are.
      CRY SOME MORE

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