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    1. 12-23-2009 10:54 PM #1
      Massacre
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      Criticism

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      I'd really love some criticism so I know what direction to take it in or if I can make any improvements on my writing style. The idea behind the blog is that I write pitches for hypothetical movies and Tv shows in what I hope is a humorous manner.
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    2. 12-29-2009 10:38 PM #2
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      I lol'd at the "critics are calling it average" part.
      Over all pretty good, keep it up!
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