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      Random Sad Thing I Wrote, Opinions?

      The weight of my mistakes crashes down
      Tidal waves bearing tears of regret,
      Trading my heart and hands
      For a second chance,
      Or a way to remove the pain.

      And the way that I dealt with things in the past was to seal them up and ignore them
      But recently I've found,
      It's getting increasingly harder
      To resolve my emotions
      These conjugating notions
      Seem to pile up, get me in a rut,
      Of which I'm unsure how to escape.

      And as the blows beat down on me once again,
      I try to find some support,
      A shoulder for me to lean on and then
      Reinforcements for the battles I have fought.

      I'm not sure I can do this anymore
      Waist deep in my own regrets,
      I know it will follow me,
      Until my wants and needs are met.

      But that's not the way it works.
      It's not how it works.
      They won't let me get what I want.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Logicalmale View Post
      The weight of my mistakes crashes down
      Tidal waves bearing tears of regret,
      Trading my heart and hands
      For a second chance,
      Or a way to remove the pain.

      And the way that I dealt with things in the past was to seal them up and ignore them
      But recently I've found,
      It's getting increasingly harder
      To resolve my emotions
      These conjugating notions
      Seem to pile up, get me in a rut,
      Of which I'm unsure how to escape.

      And as the blows beat down on me once again,
      I try to find some support,
      A shoulder for me to lean on and then
      Reinforcements for the battles I have fought.

      I'm not sure I can do this anymore
      Waist deep in my own regrets,
      I know it will follow me,
      Until my wants and needs are met.

      But that's not the way it works.
      It's not how it works.
      They won't let me get what I want.
      It's ok, if a little bit cliche.

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