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      Stream of Consciousness

      I wrote this years ago and it's the only poem I've ever written that I know by heart (besides the ones that we made into songs)


      Sometimes I think this life is just
      a never ending dream
      a "go-all-out" production and
      it's time to change the scene

      We've got to keep our minds busy
      so we wont go insane
      We tend to go quite stir-crazy
      when all the beasts are slain

      Just a stream of consciousness,
      an unstable point in space
      Just a stream of consciousness,
      so soon to be replaced

      No point in what I've done so far,
      no point in going on
      No point in finding melody
      or finishing this song~
      Last edited by owlj; 01-31-2010 at 10:11 PM.
      The geat blessing of mankind are within us and within our reach; but we shut our eyes, and like people in the dark, we fall foul upon the very thing we search for, without finding it.
      Seneca
      (7 B.C. - 65 A.A.)

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      Wow, this is pretty good!

      I really like the end:


      "No point in what I've done so far,
      no point in going on
      No point in finding melody
      or finishing this song~"
      "I am a dreamer who has temporarily lost their dreams..."

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