dark poem

I wrote this poem because i some movie with a charecter like the person in the poem. im not like this just so you know peole that reaad my poems think that they are about me but they arent not symbolism what so ever

You find me strange you find me weird
Its no suprise that im so feared

My smile, my laugh, my uniqe dispostion
Im not shocked you put me on a exposition

My clothes are black so you think my soul is to
Your reaction is really nothing new

My fate was sealed before i came
And every town will be the same

I am not like you therefore im bad
You dont know why i dont go with your fad

I dont beause your not your self
Ignoreing around you the cultural wealth

The only thing that links up is the fact that we die
Anything else is just a lie

IM COOL 8) ( maybe )

i like the poem! i dont really like poems that dont ryhme thats why i like that poem it ryhmes!

It's a decent poem. If you have to ask if your cool though.....then your not. Just my opinion. Never quit writing though. You should check out some of my poems. or maybe not. What movie did you write this from?

That's a pretty good poem. I write some poetry myself.


Are you real young, like maybe 10 years old or something, because that is kind of goofy to ask people if you are cool. (I don't mean this in an offensive way)
It doesnt matter if everyone thinks that you're cool. Because if you are wanting people to think that you are cool so bad, then you will end up trying to be someone that you're not just so that people will think that you are cool.

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Originally posted by Resnemetan
That's a pretty good poem. *I write some poetry myself. *


* * * * * * * * * *Are you real young, like maybe 10 years old or something, *because that is kind of goofy to ask people if you are cool. (I don't mean this in an offensive way)
* It doesnt matter if everyone thinks that you're cool. *Because if you are wanting people to think that you are cool so bad, then you will end up trying to be someone that you're not just so that people will think that you are cool.

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ya i posted that the first day i signed up at DV and i was a UBER LAME NEWBIE!!! but ya its really stupid now i Know im cool lol

some of the words dont flow smoothly, but overall a solid poem :thumbup: