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      Jesus in my Closet

      In the World Records thread, Espada and I often make poetry together. This is the only one I can find.
      Espada Jesus of Suburbia

      Wonder in Demise
      And there it is, you'll find it there
      The object causing all despair
      Pumping blood
      Into nothingness.

      Where are you now, then?
      Who's going to find you?

      And he holds it in his hand
      Mocking you, sick twisted grin
      Who is he now?

      In a world of pain
      Why not end it soon?
      He takes it to his wrist
      Blood flowing sweet maroon.


      It hurts. It hurts so much. You can't move. You can't breath. You can't think.

      All there is, is pain. And panic. Overwhelming panic.

      Hell isn't made of fire.
      It's made of light.

      The overwhelming surgical light you feel above your head
      The panic you feel, your skin left open.

      Forgetting all your worries
      You must confront them soon....
      You think about running
      But it is far too late


      Here they come
      Worry in their eyes
      Questions all ready
      Wonder in demise


      They could see it
      Plain as day
      Truth is written your eyes
      Fear is seeping through your face.


      I didn't write much of this one
      Last edited by Jesus of Suburbia; 02-07-2010 at 08:09 PM. Reason: I spelled Jesus wrong in the title o.o

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      Woohoo ;D Thanx, JoS And don't worry, there are more to come.


      Go insane for me, I'm that selfish you see
      We're a wicked rhyme, a line followed
      By the darkest picture, making everyone cry

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      Quote Originally Posted by EspadaInMyCloset View Post
      Woohoo ;D Thanx, JoS And don't worry, there are more to come.
      Yeah. I PMed JoS to change the title but you already know that, Espada.
      Also, http://hellopoetry.com/my-poetry/

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      Oblivisci Ego Semper Esse
      Forget I ever lived
      When I've died
      I don't want a funeral
      I want my death to hide

      Life just isn't perfect
      I can't relate
      I haven't got anything to lose
      It's not very easy
      In my current state


      And we all leave this
      This place, we call home
      This place we call hell
      Why's it so cold?


      Why live first?
      Why not just go
      To the imaginary place
      In its great glow

      Retreat
      We are all going mad

      Or is it just me?

      I imagine Myself
      Floating high in the sky
      Then I fall
      And wake up
      Insanity.
      It's in my eyes


      Skin deep it cuts, a razor sharp
      Their words tell me Iíve given up
      But know
      Iíve not been pushing so far for this
      An insult that Iím not strong enough
      To deal
      Alone


      The bottle falls
      I hear the sound of breaking glass
      I slip into darkness
      Let behind worry.


      Fade

      And I fade.

      They were right after all.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Jesus of Suburbia View Post
      Yeah. I PMed JoS to change the title but you already know that, Espada.
      Also, http://hellopoetry.com/my-poetry/

      You found me Can you direct me to your profile?


      Go insane for me, I'm that selfish you see
      We're a wicked rhyme, a line followed
      By the darkest picture, making everyone cry

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      Quote Originally Posted by EspadaInMyCloset View Post
      You found me Can you direct me to your profile?
      What?? That's the profile I made for both of us. Sorry, I can't. I'm too secretive about my name.

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      Espada found the first poem.
      There Goes the Rain

      Drown yourself with something
      That doesn't kill you.
      Tell yourself
      There's nothing wrong

      There goes the rain
      Long gone your hello.


      Don't forget the last goobyes
      But remember her sparkling eyes
      She doesn't tell, but you know
      In our eyes, where everything shows

      Hath what forth the snow in the drive,
      Can't remember how to die.
      I know nothing of how to live
      It's been a long time, but I can forgive.


      Found you of a devil's shame
      Words that cut the deepest shade
      Of red, and still, can you be
      Redeemed?

      Freeze, none to gentle
      God forgive me.


      I have no soul, for which has gone
      Remembrance of nothing but a lie
      I'm the only one who cries at dawn,
      As that's the time when I can't fly


      Cut down by a non existing God
      Wings turned to ashes, I've given up
      Who am I to question
      The Devil's motives?
      I am no different.

      On this one Espada just started spouting stanzas and I joined.
      Last edited by Jesus of Suburbia; 02-07-2010 at 09:59 PM.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Jesus of Suburbia View Post
      What?? That's the profile I made for both of us. Sorry, I can't. I'm too secretive about my name.
      When I'm logged in, the link directs me to my profile. When I'm not, it just directs me to the 'Register' or 'Log in' page.

      Hmm...


      Go insane for me, I'm that selfish you see
      We're a wicked rhyme, a line followed
      By the darkest picture, making everyone cry

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      Quote Originally Posted by EspadaInMyCloset View Post
      When I'm logged in, the link directs me to my profile. When I'm not, it just directs me to the 'Register' or 'Log in' page.

      Hmm...
      Maybe it's because I went to "My Poetry". I'll post a better link.
      [Edit:] Try this. http://hellopoetry.com/poet/jesus-in-my-closet/

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      Quote Originally Posted by Jesus of Suburbia View Post
      Maybe it's because I went to "My Poetry". I'll post a better link.
      [Edit:] Try this. http://hellopoetry.com/poet/jesus-in-my-closet/
      It worked, thanks.


      Go insane for me, I'm that selfish you see
      We're a wicked rhyme, a line followed
      By the darkest picture, making everyone cry

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      Quote Originally Posted by EspadaInMyCloset View Post
      It worked, thanks.
      Yup.

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