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      I drew a cat...

      ...girl.



      You like?

      It took me awhile to draw this just right...

      I had issues getting the apron and pants down just right, and the hair was a bit of a challenge. I might have to redo the hair in the back, but I think the ears and everything came out very nice.

      I'm going to start drawing off Chibis, as their forms are in much simplier shapes, then work my way up to normal anime.

      Edit: I'll photoshop the arms and legs later so they look more proportional.
      Last edited by slayer; 01-13-2009 at 07:36 AM.
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      You have no imagination. You will not be an artist until you get one.

      I know its harsh, but its the truth and its too late to care about sugar coating.

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      I like it Slay.

      Chibi is teh Kawaii.
      You merely have to change your point of view slightly, and then that glass will sparkle when it reflects the light.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Xaqaria View Post
      You have no imagination. You will not be an artist until you get one.

      I know its harsh, but its the truth and its too late to care about sugar coating.
      What the hell are you talking about?

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      Quote Originally Posted by slayer View Post
      What the hell are you talking about?
      Too much lemonparty.

      Would like to see more stuff Slay. =D
      Last edited by ClouD; 01-13-2009 at 03:12 PM.
      You merely have to change your point of view slightly, and then that glass will sparkle when it reflects the light.

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      Quote Originally Posted by slayer View Post
      What the hell are you talking about?
      I think his problem is that it seems to be just another regurgitated concept. No real originality, or inspiration, as a piece of art.

      Basically the way its a complete copy of the thousands of other peoples drawings of catgirls or the like and with really no distinguishing features would suggest a lack of imagination.

      However that said, if it was your intention just to draw a catgirl and not a piece of art, then you were successful.
      Well done.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Xaqaria View Post
      You have no imagination. You will not be an artist until you get one.

      I know its harsh, but its the truth and its too late to care about sugar coating.
      Dude, he's just starting to get a handle of the basics. You must first build the tools to build the masterpiece.

      The only flaw I see is that this cutie isn't colored. And that the forward leg sort of bends funny.
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      Quote Originally Posted by Omicron View Post
      I think his problem is that it seems to be just another regurgitated concept. No real originality, or inspiration, as a piece of art.

      Basically the way its a complete copy of the thousands of other peoples drawings of catgirls or the like and with really no distinguishing features would suggest a lack of imagination.

      However that said, if it was your intention just to draw a catgirl and not a piece of art, then you were successful.
      Well done.
      i agree with every word of that.

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      I can't figure out her eyes. She looks flailing insane or blind like a bat.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Abra View Post
      Dude, he's just starting to get a handle of the basics. You must first build the tools to build the masterpiece.

      The only flaw I see is that this cutie isn't colored. And that the forward leg sort of bends funny.


      Quote Originally Posted by Marvo View Post
      I can't figure out her eyes. She looks flailing insane or blind like a bat.
      Her eyes do seem weird...when I first drew them, they were alright, but coloring them was really awkward...

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      why don't you post a worthless drawing like this with the rest of you're worthless drawings on one thread instead of being a cock tease with this drawing with no merit that you wave in front of us like a little child?

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      Quote Originally Posted by dylanshmai View Post
      why don't you post a worthless drawing like this with the rest of you're worthless drawings on one thread instead of being a cock tease with this drawing with no merit that you wave in front of us like a little child?
      Wow, was this really necessary?

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      DAMN IT! All these catgirls!










      The picture's alright...

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      Explain the eyes to me, why is there a line coming out of them? Why are they the same colour as the rest of the eye? And you need to make the head/ears smaller.

      By the way, stop making a thread for each picture you draw, just make a portfolio thread or something, and keep it all in there.

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      Quote Originally Posted by slayer View Post
      Wow, was this really necessary?
      you're right, but that was really just my all honesty.

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      Quote Originally Posted by slayer View Post




      Her eyes do seem weird...when I first drew them, they were alright, but coloring them was really awkward...
      Good fundementals, Now you just need an original consept and fix the eyes and you will be good ^^, But yeah its pretty nice.

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      Quote Originally Posted by Ghost3DE View Post
      Good fundementals, Now you just need an original consept and fix the eyes and you will be good ^^, But yeah its pretty nice.
      Thanks, and yeah, I'll try and come up with my own design of some sort...

      Here's an updated picture:

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      What's wrong with her eyes?

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      Quote Originally Posted by Daniel Danciu View Post


      What's wrong with her eyes?
      I'm trying different tutorials to make the eyes...

      I haven't found a good one yet

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      Depending on the type of eyes you're going for, there are several things you can do.

      0: Pupil is the top half of a narrow oval, and the iris is the top half of a wider oval enclosing it.
      1a: Pupil is an oval, iris is two marks to either side of it,. This won;t work with your drawing's eyes, not wide enough for the height.
      1b: pupil is a circle, iris is like a C (serifed) with the bottom and sometimes the lower part of the side covered by the eyelid and socket.
      2a: two circles. Iris is centered in the eye, pupil indicates direction character is looking.
      2b: two circles. Pupil is in center of iris (smaller iris than 2a) and you just have to play around with the placement to see what looks right.
      3: either 1b or 2b, sometimes 2a, but with a small shine on the upper right edge of the iris (viewer's right). shaped as though it's on the surface of a sphere.

      And the right leg (character's, not viewer's perspective) doesn't look right, though it does seem proper for this drawing style, probably because the left leg is off. Not only does itr seem to be using weird perspective along with the ankle being cut in at the shoe, it looks like there's a knee in the middle of the shin. Maybe pull the angle of the shoe up, face it a bit more toward the viewer, and make the lower left (character) leg less bulgy.

      I hope this is helpful. I would suggest a tutorial dsote for eyes, but I don;t actually recall where any are.
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      art too me isn't about rules though. In fact my favorite thing about art is the mistakes that you make, it adds much more than just a "human dimension to it".

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      Hehe, Nice, slayer.
      Bollocks.

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      I think I did a really good job on the eyes. What do you guys think?



      I also redid the hair and the legs.

      Edit: Also added the right hand...it felt "gone"
      Last edited by slayer; 01-20-2009 at 03:33 AM.

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