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      Just the Wind

      This one I wrote more as an exercise with each line gaining an extra syllable over the line before it starting with one.


      Please
      Don't leave
      Just stay here
      What would I do
      I'm lost without you
      I guess I'll just pretend

      I see you all of the time
      But sadly just in my minds eye
      You are the faintly whispering wind
      The soft breeze that no container can hold
      My fingers touch the tenderness of your love
      Only to slip on by with a soft whimpering
      The sound that comes from my heart as it now falls apart
      Because it realizes you will always be just the wind

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      I really like that, esp the last two lines.

      Peace Sensi.
      "One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain.
      Hit me with music now, oh now, hit me with music, harder, brutalize me". Bob Marley.

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