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      Mindwanderer's 'Art'

      This thread is for any art I've done. Drawings, Songs, writings etc.


      Smoking
      Sol.
      Cigarette.
      Coffee.
      Childhood.
      Lingering stale, nostalgia.

      As a child my house always smelled like someone put old coffee in an ashtray. My family's full of smokers and coffee drinkers, and lighting up with a cup of coffee on a cold morning with a buddy is one of the best feelings I think I can ever have.
      7
      Seven Mongrels wait for me,
      ---------------------------Only
      --------------------------can
      ------------------------time
      ------------------------go
      ------------------sideways
      ---------------------to
      -------------------the
      -----------------flow,
      ----------------but
      --------------time
      ------------from
      -----------end
      --------pierces
      -------doors.
      Last Moments
      It's too damn hard. I've tryed so goddman hard. To think people say good things happen to good people. He's fucking beautiful, but so fucking oblivious. The look in his eyes everytime we stare. The pureness, without knowing any better. It's been 3 months, with two to go. Why wait? Seb is the only thing I have, and he means my whole life to me. The cancer causes noticeable fatigue, but his will is strong as ever. Everyday he struggles up and down the stairs, but it means so much to us that we do it anyways. I'm not gonna last without him, so we'll might as well go together. The tears that burned my cheeks start to cool, and Seb is right there with me... head on my lap. I start the car, and my limbs start to feel like pins and needles. I'm scared shitless and Seb can tell, but his warmth brings feeling back to my numbing fingers. Staring into his eyes his little lungs give up, and as he fades away his enthusiasm, his love, remains till the very end. My sobs muffle the puttering engine, and as I breath deep I feel myself getting stiff. My last breath, with Seb... There's nothing but black, not even love.

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      Eyes to see.
      Sitting on the shore I wait for the rain to stop. The thundering sound of infinite numbers of droplets battering the lake. I see, a ways out, something struggling in the water. A fox.

      I grab a life jacket and push my canoe into the water... the water seems ecstatic with energy. I beat at the water with my paddle, trying my best to get to the fox.

      The fox is drawn to the canoe, pawing at the rim trying to pull itself from the chaotic pane of constantly shattering glass. Less interested in me, and more interested in getting dry, it darts under me and curls up with a quaking body.

      The canoe scrapes onto the jagged shore. I wrap the fox in my coat and bring it inside to near the fire.

      "You've helped me succeed further into one of the basic veins of existance... life." speaks the fox

      "How many facets of existance are there fox?"

      "For a fox, not many, but for you there are many. Simply by using your energies, and exerting your power to save me you've shown one of your purposes... to care."

      "Fox, how can you speak?"

      "Through you."

      Sitting on the shore I wait for the rain to stop. The thundering sound of infinite numbers of droplets battering the lake. I see, a ways out, something struggling in the water. Only a fox.

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      I like 7 and the last one best.

      I like in 7 how you did the....fuck, can't think of the word. I don't know, the text. the words puzzle me, I like that.

      Eyes to see is strange...very. also puzzling. I think some parts could be worded a bit better maybe (I would have to think), aside from that, there's only one thing that really bothers me - I think there should be a comma here:

      "How many facets of existance are there, fox?"
      other than that, I like it overall. interesting. I like how the subject asks the fox a question before saying anything about it being a talking fox...ha.


      Ignorant bliss is an oxymoron; but so is miserable truth.

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      Hey! Thanks! It won't let me edit so I can't add that comma And to be honest all of these poems were made in a rush, so I'm suprised there aren't more errors.

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      Flume (Bon Iver) - Cover
      http://soundcloud.com/mwg-music/flume-cover-bon-iver

      Frusciante Inspired Jam - Original
      Funky-ish Jam.
      http://soundcloud.com/mwg-music/jam-...iante-inspired

      I am Free - Original
      Guitar, singing, and overtone singing.
      http://soundcloud.com/mwg-music/i-am...ginal-overtone

      Mourning Wolf - Original
      Eastern style guitar and overtone singing.
      http://soundcloud.com/mwg-music/mourning-wolf-overtone

      Till we died - Original
      Dark\Depressing.
      http://soundcloud.com/mwg-music/unti...-died-original
      Last edited by mindwanderer; 07-17-2011 at 07:38 PM.

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      Been smoking too long (Cover)


      Ain't No Grave (Cover)


      Repeating (Cover)


      Compass (Cover)


      You Don't Care (Original)


      Penetrate Time (Cover)


      A Corner (Cover)


      I wu vu (Original)
      Last edited by mindwanderer; 09-02-2011 at 11:35 PM.

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