Thread: Fucking Thursdays are the worst

I would take a class, or just study real poetry. this was painful to read (and not in a good way). you're using hackneyed rhymes and...I don't even know what else to say. this is uncreative, uninteresting...bland.

what exactly are you trying to convey? what's the point in this? just venting? I mean, I wrote shit like this when I was 13...but it's not poetry.

Repost the poem. I'm sure there are people who are willing to give their opinions without insulting you. Maybe it's not the best poem ever written, but I would like to read it, so please put it back up. We're not all like him.

LRT: edited your post, no need for that, situation handled.

regarding the OP, i too would like to read the original posting

is this acceptable? :')

Originally Posted by nerve

is this acceptable? :')

Lolnerve. I agree the critique was a *tiny* bit on the harsh side, but thats how I like my critism. Brutal and Honest. As for the OP, Don't take something down because 1 person didn't like it.

the cool thing about it is, the poem was going on and on about 'something something sick of all the lies I want people to just tell me the truth' I don't know it was so boring I don't remember exactly :c

yeah if it weren't for that though my comment probably wouldn't have been quite so blunt, but I still like to be completely honest when it comes to critique. no bullshit no sugar deal with it honest :')

You're like school in the summer time, nerve. No class.

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