Not in a good mood... :\

today just isn't my day....


something i threw together to get some of it off my chest:

I'm in the dark again
void, my old friend
left blind by scars
i reach my out into the cold
and find nothing near or far.

the same familiar ache
the same cracks running through the old break
i must be using the wrong glue
i must be reusing you

Shades of grey
grow dark each and every day
throwing me back and forth
between the pain and the ecstasy
Love and pain carry the same taste
your lips and wear your face

truth carries a sour tone
with every word you've sewn
illuminating the darkness
i look into the distance
and hope for the best

comment if ya want.

I like it

Thank you

I like it too, quite vivid, I can tell you put emotional effort into choicing the phrases. "I'm reusing your darkness" is what's supposed to be stringing together, correct? If so, I like that. Ties the whole thing together really good.

yep, thank you Spen

Very good. Very, very good.

Thank you tommo, i appreciate it.

This is awesome. You just gave me some inspiration. *starts on yet another poem*

I like what you write.. you can really write something if you're too emotional:)