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    1. 05-03-2006 01:53 AM #1
      Bosco
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      everything dissappeared

      my grandma died 4 years ago but we were really close...before she died i had a dream she passed on and i got to talk to her one more time, when i found out she died the person who was about to tell me didnt even have to tell me i just knew, i have dreams about her everyonce in a while..usually pretty vivid..the other nite i had a strange one though..i was on my way to her house ( it was wierd the house changed 3 times in the dream from her house to my otehr grandmas house who has passed on to my dads house)but i was on my way to her house with a bunch of people and we were going to have a party there, when we got htere my grandma was there hanging otu with us and out of no where my x gf appeared there, its wierd cuz my grandma lived 4 hours away so idk y all my friends would go there but anyway we are hanging out and i see my x gf and try to talk to her but she wanted nothing to do with it, eventually i got her to talk to me and we were lying down on a couch talking saying we never should of broken up ladi da da or whatever then i must of fallen asleep in her arms because all of a sudden i open my eyes and everyone was gone, they just dissappeared..the only people i saw were my dad and stepmom and i tried to ask them where everyone went but they ignored me.............................my question is why did everyone dissapear then my dad ignore me?
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    2. 05-05-2006 11:12 PM #2
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      Drop out,

      I don't know what your dream means and feel for you, but it is really difficult to read your writing.

      Make it easy on us. Proof-read your work, please. Use periods after sentences. Separate into paragraphs. It's just too difficult to focus on your dream. Your writing style is detracting from your telling of the dream. You are making it too difficult on yourself and on us.

      Best wishes. You can do better.

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    3. 05-06-2006 11:19 PM #3
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      i think it is seperating fine. i used commas and ... im not here to write out everything perfect im here to tell a story, im sorry if my punctuation is not perfect but i reread my staory and i think its fine...im going to quote Leo here on one and say that what u can do in 10 mins is often more to the point than writing it for 20 mins
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    4. 05-09-2006 04:24 PM #4
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      Well, I'm not going to go blind trying to decipher your writing. If it takes me 30 minutes to read something I should be able to read in two minutes, it isn't worth wasting my time.
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    5. 05-10-2006 06:59 PM #5
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      I think you're punctuation was fine. Actually i had a similar dream.

      Well my grandma isn't dead, but i had a dream that i was having a party at her house. And someone (that i didn't like, can't remember who it was) showed up and i got upset. I went into my grandma's room where everyone's coats were, and i began taking any money that i could find out of everyone's coat. I ended up with about $80 dollars. I knew it was wrong, but i didn't care. Then when i turned on the bedroom light (i stole the money in the darkness) my grandma was sitting in a corner on a chair sleeping. Sleeping sitting straight up! She must have realized i noticed her and began talking to me. I was too drunk in my dream to talk to her so i told her we'd talk about whatever we were talking about later and shut off the light. When i went back into the living room, everyone was gone except my sister and my boyfriend. I asked my sister where her friend went and she said "she fell off the table so she went home" and that was it pretty much. no idea what it means though. Just thought it was crazy that my dream was so close to yours.
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