DVA article draft

Mmm this isn't done but here is the first draft. Feel free to comment and post new drafts.

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The DreamViews Academy

The DreamViews Academy is a free online lucid dreaming school, hosted on the DreamViews forum. Students will get lessons from excellent teaching staff and the backing of the entire community.

Any person who has been a DreamViews member for two weeks or more can join. The best part is you can take as many classes as you want and they will always be free.

The DVA is managed by Director Louie54 and Co-Director Zebrah. Not to mention the rest of our dedicated staff. All teachers are carefully selected to be sure that they can provide students with a great learning experience. Our friendly staff can give you a jumpstart into a lifetime of lucid dreaming fun.

Currently we are offering classes on; The DILD, WILD, MILD, techniques plus a class on Reality Checking. More classes are starting up all the time so if the class you want isn't up just check back. With the added ability to hold classes over Internet Relay Chat (IRC) built into DV. With IRC classes students can ask questions and get a fun class experience in real time. All chat logs are saved so if you can't make the class you can still learn.

Every teacher is different so be sure to checkout the thread titled "Class Catalog". Inside you will find information about; times, dates, materials, assignments, and much more for every class. Not to mention you can see classes that are starting up in the future. Each class has a "class ID" for example DILD-1. These are used to speed up the registration process.

Sign up is a breeze. Just go to the 2010 class registration thread. Then sign up for the classes you want using the class ID.

So what are you waiting for?

Come join us to learn the art of lucid dreaming. Where the possibilities actually are endless.

It has my good point of view. I liked it!

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The DreamViews Academy

Due to our failed adoption program, which was designed for newbies to get one-one help from another more experienced member, The DreamViews Academy (DVA) has been established. Our mission is to educate those like you, who may be new to the subject of lucid dreaming, to help you reach a better understanding of what it is, how to achieve it, and to hopefully prolong and control them (dreams).

The DreamViews Academy is a free online lucid dreaming school, hosted on the DreamViews forum. Students will get lessons from excellent experienced teaching staff and the backing of the entire community.

Any person who has been a DreamViews member for two weeks or more can join. The good news is that you only need a Dream Views account to join. The best part is You are welcome to can take as many classes as you want. and they will always be free.

The DVA is managed by dedicated Dream Views members and general Dream Views Staff members alike, all who are volunteers. Director Louie54 and Co-Director Zebrah. Not to mention the rest of our dedicated staff. All teachers are carefully selected to be sure that they can provide students with a great learning experience. Our friendly staff can give you a jumpstart into a lifetime of lucid dreaming fun.

Currently Generally,are we offer classes on; The DILD, WILD, MILD, techniques and more classes are offered based on it's availability.plus a class on Reality Checking More classes are starting up all the time so if the class you want isn't up just check back. With the added ability to hold classes over Internet Relay Chat (IRC) built into DV. With IRC classes students can ask questions and get a fun class experience in real time. Professors are required to keep all chat logs are saved so if you can't make the class, we will be more than happy to provide you with the chat log of the class you missed. you can still learn.

Every teacher is different so be sure to checkout the thread titled "Class Catalog". Inside you will find information about; times, dates, materials, assignments, and much more for every class. Not to mention you can see classes that are starting up in the future. Each class has a "class ID" for example DILD-1. These are used to speed up the registration process.

Sign up is a breeze. Just go to the 2010 class registration thread. Then sign up for the classes you want using the class ID.

So what are you waiting for?

Come join us to learn the art of lucid dreaming. Where the possibilities actually are endless.
Good Work Zebrah on the conclusion ;) And thank you for getting this started

So does anyone else want to take a shot at this?

Anyone... anyone...?

If I have time tomorrow or Tuesday I will write something. Wait for it!

Did a little punctuation cleaning, and also cleaned the wording up a little. Let me know what you think!

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The DreamViews Academy

Due to our failed adoption program, which was designed for newbies to get one-one help from another more experienced member, The DreamViews Academy (DVA) has been established. [Puts a negative spin.] In an effort to help a greater number of lucid dreamers in-training, The Dreamviews Academy was established as a replacement to the adoption program. Our mission is to educate those like you, who may be new to the subject of lucid dreaming, to help you reach a better understanding of what it is, how to achieve it, and to hopefully prolong and control them (dreams).

The DreamViews Academy is a free online lucid dreaming school, hosted on the DreamViews forum. Students will get lessons from experienced teaching staff and the backing of the entire community.

The good news is that you only need a DreamViews [put them together, for consistency of the document] account to join. You are welcome to take as many classes as you want.

The DVA is managed by dedicated DreamViews members and general DreamViews staff members alike, all who are volunteers. All teachers are carefully selected to be sure that they can provide students with a great learning experience. Our friendly staff can give you a jumpstart into a lifetime of lucid dreaming fun.

Generally, we offer classes on The DILD, WILD, MILD. Techniques and more classes are will be offered based on it's availability. More classes are starting up all the time, so if the class you want isn't up available yet, just check back. keep checking back! With the added ability to hold classes over Internet Relay Chat (IRC) built into DV. Classes are held over DV's Internet Relay Chat (IRC), giving you a real-time learning experience and the advantage of having your questions answered right away. With IRC classes students can ask questions and get a fun class experience in real time. Professors are required to keep all chat logs, so if you can't make the class, we will be more than happy to provide you with the chat log of the class you missed.

Every teacher is different, so be sure to check out the thread titled "Class Catalog". Inside each class thread, you will find information about times, dates, materials, assignments and much more for every class. Not to mention, This is also where you can will see classes that are starting up in the future. Each class has a "class ID" for example DILD-1. These are used to speed up the registration process.

Sign up is a breeze. Just go to the 2010 class registration thread. Then sign up for the classes you want using the class ID.

So what are you waiting for? [I've never liked these hooks! Sorry, it's a radio/commercial writing thing... Never ask open-ended questions that a person can answer anything more than a "yes" to!]

Come join us to learn the art of lucid dreaming. Where the possibilities actually are endless.

That looks great seren. Sorry I have been so busy lately I didn't have a chance to to over it. By Monday my schedual will be better.