Much better than my tutorial, A + |
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No one really voted in my poll (2 possible tutorials), but I decided to go ahead and make a tutorial on increasing dream realism. I'm worried about it not being long enough though . If you have any corrections about grammar, punctuation, using the right word, etc., feel free to tell me. Also, if you want to comment about the tutorial in any way then please do. I'm not so happy about the format though, I'll let you decide. Anyways... here it goes... |
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This Tutorial looks very well thought out as well as user friendly. |
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Thanks Howetzer and Sparky. I would also like to know if I'm being redundant with phrases, words, or ideas in general (it is annoying to read the information more than once, and a tutorial is for one "concise" thing). Also, tell me if I'm leaving anything out. |
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Edited the tutorial, check out the second paragraph... |
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Awesome, thats one great tutorial, wasup. |
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Very nice.... I'd still like you to write the other article as well though Unless you want someone else to attempt that one... |
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Tips For Newbies | What to do in an LD
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Thanks... usually when I ask for help on improving tutorials no one ever comments on it... |
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I'm gonna pop a question in here though.. what about becoming aware that you are asleep.. and losing control of the dream only to wake up because you "felt" your body. |
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Tips For Newbies | What to do in an LD
Unless otherwise stated, views expressed in this post are not necessarily representative of the official Dream Views stance. Hell, it's probably not even representative of me.
Yah, that's good. |
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[22:59] <Kaniaz> You basically did a massive shit on the rug of this IRC
[22:59] <Kaniaz> And called it a message
I'll print it out now and read it when I have time... |
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Ignorant bliss is an oxymoron; but so is miserable truth.
I've read the first half(which is what im only interested in) and I'd say its pretty good A/A+....good job |
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Curiosity killed the cat but at least it didnt die an ignorant bastard
I doubt anyone noticed but I've been away for a couple days . I've tried to not come to dreamviews because it is making me go to sleep at midnight or later and I feel it is affecting my academic performance. I don't want to make one of those "can't be here as much" topics so just letting you know well... I can't be here as much due to school. I WILL, though, come on the weekends as often as I can. |
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Curiosity killed the cat but at least it didnt die an ignorant bastard
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