Thread: Waterfall (original song)

You should really put the stressed parts of words on stressed notes. Cosy is said 'COsy', not 'coSY'. So put CO on a beat. It's pretty much the universal rule for matching lyrics to notes. If it's not matched then either change the notes or change the lyric, don't try to shoehorn it in there.

The basic structure of the song is nice but to make a nice song out of it you have to work on the instrumentation. Just pressing a chord won't cut it. Either strum the chord on a guitar or add some interesting arpeggios to the piano.