It's not bad, but I do have a few critiques:
It seems more like an intense movie scene with an emotional track playing over top of it (which is awesome, don't get me wrong), but not so much like a music video. In one respect, you can really feel the depth of the scene, with the music behind it, but the only thing you need to work on is editing the clips so that they actually match the music.
As it stands, it looks like you took the whole scene (ignoring the repeating clips) and just let it play with the music behind it. We should actually see the action going along with the instrumentation and the lyrics. Treat every portion of the song as something that you need to tailor the video to. Have the explosions match the percussion. Have the events in the video match the lyrics. It will take more time, and will be much more difficult to do, but (IMHO) it is what separates a good music video from a (albeit well-coupled) movie scene with music placed over it.
That being said, good song pick for an awesome scene. 3 1/2 stars out of 5 (I gave you 4 on youtube).
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