He added paragraphs.. lol
ahhh awesome
If you dont like my critiques heres what will help you "DONT READ IT"
-_-
so, in otherwords you can act however you want and everyone has to look over anything you do bad and give only the possitive? Thats not how the world works buddy.
I have been enlightened on this technique, and to tell the truth its pretty good. But you need to enlighten yourself on how to act on a forum and in the real world.