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You are fast asleep in your bed
You’re eyes gape
At the image in your head
Which is this landscape…
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/5979/p1rb9.png
Before you do anything, pause the earth
Enjoy and view what your time and patients put forth
Smell the fresh air
Look beyond the trees
Travel that far, do you dare?
No, let’s just stare, and feel the breeze.
As you read, thus you only see text
But dreaming it is farther than reading
So you ask what next?
I finally neither strive nor mend
To do what I longed
Earth bend </span>
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7206/p2dx4.png rock floating
So where dose this lead me?
I simply play with the rocks
Practice with the river.
For as long as a day may be
At the thought of this being reality
you may quiver
But it’s only a dream
Of course there is more to the dream than just a rock you make hovered.
Hey it’s up to you to decide what happens next.
Well I gotta say that last picture was surely made up! I did a bunch of cut and pastes gathering the rock, sky, grass ECT. I just made that last image for the fun of it. After you laugh at it for a second try and visualize your self in this dream, floating the rock, in that vary spot.
<span style="font-family:Lucida Console">Well tell me how you liked the poem?
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Wow Necco thats really cool :bravo:
That must've taken a while to do! I like the pictures as well, they seem to fit in with the dreamy style. You know there's an Artists Corner in the forum where you can put your poems. I hope you show us more :D
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Oh I thought it was horrible!
so I am surprised to see you like it
thus I will make more better than the first! :content:
the truth is it took me about 20 minutes! but its worth it.
<span style="font-family:Fixedsys">before I go I have to say the community here is great!</span>
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Very cool, Necco :) Glad you've found our little community. See you around.
