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      Post My Story off the top of my head.

      By Coolb3rt
      I will post more of it later in comments, tell me if you like it so far.
      I find myself awakening into a strange place, I have an eerie feeling as I get up, it is raining hard. Where am I? I start to walk around and find that I am a semi truck loading dock behind a large weathered building, I head over towards a small staircase leading to a door, I am about to enter when something catches my eye to the left sticking out around the side of the building, I turn to go investigate. As I peek around the corner I am shocked at what I see, it looks like some sort of destroyed army truck flipped over and on fire. I then realize that something big is going down, or has gone down. I should probably try to keep a low profile, get some sort of weapon and try to find out what is really going on.
      soon the flames once consuming the ruined truck die off due to the heavy rain. I start to pick through the debris hoping to find something useful, I spot a metal box it has two sturdy latches on each side, most likely for storing ammunition. I crawl in and pull it out, it definitely has something in it, I unhook the latches and open it up. I find various types of bullets, I close it up and continue looking through the wreckage. I find a 45 caliber pistol wedged between two seats, it is loaded and ready to fire. What luck! After finding nothing else of use in the truck I go back over to the door and begin to enter. The door opens silently, the inside is dimly lighted by old brownish skylights, there are boxes all over the place.

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      Written in present tense?

      What.
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      I know lol I experimented with that, thought it'd be fun

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      Dude, its awesome. Keep going

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      ^_^ thanks!

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