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      I have a name

      How does one draw his or her emotion? Can emotion have a face, a face in which you can recognize? Does it have a special touch to the body? Am I able to bottle up emotion, to hold and to charish? Does it come with a price?

      As I sit under my tree, I can only wonder. I wonder why the sun makes me happy. I wonder why the wind moves my heart. I wonder if with every passing moment I am getting closer to something.

      Why is grass green? What is green? I see green as life and rebirth. Sitting under my tree I see that I am surrounded by life and fresh starts. What does that make of me? Who am I? I have a name, but is that all I will be known as?

      I am emotion. I am life. I am rebirth. I am a fresh start.

      How does one draw his or her emotion? I consider my art as a reflection of my emotion.

      Can emotion have a face, a face in which you can recognize? I too have a face, one in which you can recognize and trust within.

      Does it have a special touch to the body? I feel love and pain equally. Not only am I able to receive but I can give as well.

      Am I able to bottle up my emotion, to hold and to charish? I still see your face close to mine. The wind slowly running through your hair as the shade surronds us. I can still see the glimmer in your eyes.

      Does it come with a price? I come with no price but I seem to always leave in debt.


      I have a name, but is that all I will be known as?

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      shouldn't this be in philospohy?

      emotion does have a face. 8) see...

      the grass is green because it's pigments absorb all the other colors of the rainbow and reflect green.

      you are not rebirth, you are the same as you were 2 seconds ago. you just have a new outlook.
      clear eyes. strong hands.

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      I wrote a poem for school with about the same subject.

      I'll post it if I feel like it.

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      As much as I hate for people to critique my work, I find it helpfull for me to learn from. Thank you adidas for the insight

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      i was just poking fun. i liked it a lot.
      clear eyes. strong hands.

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      i liked it, especially the begining where u discuss the sun and the wind. as i read it i could visialize you sitting under a tree acumpanied by a lush green carpet of grass, with sun light scatter on u as it shines through the branches and lil gusts of wind blowing through your hair as u sit pondering. since i got such great imagery i think its good from that aspect too.
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      I think it should be in Artist's Corner.

      But it's a great piece of work. I suggest fixing the spelling error though, it takes a lot from the flow. (Surrounds)

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      I wasn't sure if I should put this in the Artist's or Philosophy or General, so I put it in here.

      Squall, thank you for the spell check! Was that the only one?

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      Yeah I like it very interesting.

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      I find ways to express my emotions...mainly write...all the time.
      "i am the crumpled sheets of paper behind an artists' attempt at perfection"


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