shouldn't this be in philospohy? |
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How does one draw his or her emotion? Can emotion have a face, a face in which you can recognize? Does it have a special touch to the body? Am I able to bottle up emotion, to hold and to charish? Does it come with a price? |
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shouldn't this be in philospohy? |
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clear eyes. strong hands.
I wrote a poem for school with about the same subject. |
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As much as I hate for people to critique my work, I find it helpfull for me to learn from. Thank you adidas for the insight |
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i was just poking fun. i liked it a lot. |
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clear eyes. strong hands.
i liked it, especially the begining where u discuss the sun and the wind. as i read it i could visialize you sitting under a tree acumpanied by a lush green carpet of grass, with sun light scatter on u as it shines through the branches and lil gusts of wind blowing through your hair as u sit pondering. since i got such great imagery i think its good from that aspect too. |
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Adopted by Gameover
I think it should be in Artist's Corner. |
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I wasn't sure if I should put this in the Artist's or Philosophy or General, so I put it in here. |
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Yeah I like it very interesting. |
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I find ways to express my emotions...mainly write...all the time. |
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"i am the crumpled sheets of paper behind an artists' attempt at perfection"
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