The thesis statement is simply the point you're trying to convey with your entire essay. So why are you writing this essay? If it's to state that there is a difference between the two works, then yes, that's a fine thesis statement. It's not supposed to be pretty or anything, it's to the point, it gives the reader exactly what they need to know to see where you're going with the rest of the essay.
Personally, I would say something more along the lines of "Richard Connell's 'The Most Dangerous Game' differs from the movie adaptation by 'insert-director/screenplay writer here' in several different aspects. Firstly, (insert argument #1, which will serve as body paragraph #1). Secondly, (insert argument #2)...." and so on.
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