DV Poem Game

Continue the poem from the person above you.

Rules:
- Two lines per post
- Rhyming pattern should be as Xei so kindly suggested:

Quote:

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Thread starter writes line A.

The next person rhymes A then makes a rhyme B

Then the next person rhymes with B and then line C

CD

DC

etc.

This way we make one continuous poem and EVERYBODY GETS TO RHYME :D

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I'll start (one line so i don't end up mentioning myself twice):

DV poem game is pretty fucking gay

...this currently makes no logical sense.

(That wasn't a poem).

Although, do I have the authority to assert what can and what cannot be considered poetry?

Yes.

Quote:

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It's not really a poem. But the fact it's rhyming and such is why I'm calling it a poem game.

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mhm

What I'm saying is you said you have to post one line and that it should rhyme with the previous if it's an even line but then you posted two so I couldn't rhyme and I was like what and also there's no way for the poem to be continuous and also nobody's going to want to post the first line because that's boring and also how can each line of the couplet refer to the above member it literally could not function logically.

,,,,, (you can distribute these above if you want, I was going for impressionism rather than rigid prosody).

I PROPOSE the much more sensible idea of

Thread starter writes line A.

The next person rhymes A then makes a rhyme B

Then the next person rhymes with B and then line C

CD

DC

etc.

This way we make one continuous poem and EVERYBODY GETS TO RHYME :D

but the previous username thing would still never work

just looking our for your threads Slash; altruism is the driving force of my soul.

Good idea, man.
Edited OP.

So continue from here (the line I started with in the OP):
(Only one line for starting so I don't mention myself twice)

DV poem game is pretty fucking gay

but it's made by The Boss so I'd better not say.
Then again I could just say something like 'purple',

Xei did not include my name, he is such a konturple.
But making up words makes me feel better inside,

yet I cannot bring myself to diss this other guy,
but I may as well commit suicide,

EDIT: Wow, my post made no sense. I changed it.

Snowboy and Xei didn't look at the rules, am I right?,
but I don't care let's move on with the show,

before Slash has to take another blow.
But "What?", I say,

EDIT: First line fixed! Sorry! :embarrassed:

I said there's a boy in the hay.
i would help him, but I'm too lazy,

Now my head is getting kinda hazy,
and everybody around me is starting to go wild,

too much snow in his head to say "slash", such a child.
damn it to hell, I don't care anymore,

so now Slash will sit back with his Coors,
and watch Sunday night football on his big screen TV,

It should have been three lines so two would be rhymes it's plain to see
The third would have been used to set the next poster up more of this SB

I think Akono means BS, but I''m just going to leave it be.
Might as well add some more for good ol' entertainment

I will stop paying rent without consent
and go on to live in a traveling tent

I took out the username rule 'cause everyone's bent,
so I'll just sit here with my lovely Lucozade.

I'm not sure just quite how that is pronounced, so I will just do my best. This thread must be revived! :D

for which I forgot to pay.
So now that this thread is revived,