My poetic repose

[Gwendolyn]

My Euphoria Hey you over there, With the black hair and shy smile, Come over here and visit for awhile. Won't you be a part of my Euphoria? Where devils cry, And angels sing? Where you can do most anything? My Euphoria. Inside that candid look upon your face, Is the story of the human race. It's the point in life you just can't place. Come try out my Euphoria! The best place you will ever find, Because it is inside my mind. The poet's palace! The Lover's grace! As I said, You just wont find a better place! My Euphoria. I know you think I'm very strange, And rightly so. The strangest you will ever know. And with that sad face you always make, (Just seeing it makes my heart ache) You are in need of happiness. Come stay in my Euphoria! It's the only place on all the earth, That has such happiness and mirth. And if you come, indeed you'll stay. The place that lets you 'Seize the day'. My Euphoria. Is it an OK poem?

[Umbrasquall]

Wow nice... This definitely deserves to be in Artist's Corner by the way. I like it.

[Gwendolyn]

Thank you! I think my poems are a little extreme sometimes. Does anyone think there is anything I could do to improve it?