Inside I hide

It only hurts me when I think about it. I hate this feeling. I thought i couldn't hurt.
decisions of impurity run its course and im still standing,
As much as I fight it, it only grows worse,
It's been so long since I knew what it is like,
to feel o.k. I must wander some more,
wonder or wander I wonder,
Can the search not find me in my weakened state?
Will someone, anyone reach out a helping hand?,
5 digits and a grasp to pull me out of the sand,
It's just words, equals feelings and emotions,
In turn to recieve what has been given and maybe more.

What am I feeling? What am I missing?
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Just a bunch of random letters that turned into random words.

I really like this poem. I am going through something rough right now and as I was reading it, I can see the despair of the writer and can relate.

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Will someone, anyone reach out a helping hand?,
5 digits and a grasp to pull me out of the sand,
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I like this sentence a lot and I think many people will agree with this on those certain bad days.

Overall, I really enjoyed how well you were expressing yourself and the sincerty of the words that produce such a mood in the poem.

Interesting poem. Although it's not really my usual thing. Plus it seems like so many poems are just depressing or have a very bleak note to them, to which this isn't an exception.

But don't take any offense, cuz generally I don't like poetry at all.

And by the way I think you made a mistake, not sure if it was purposeful, but in a poem, it stands out. Plus it's in a spot where it doesn't seem like it was done on purpose.

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It's been so long since I knew what it is like[/b]

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Should be "It's been so long since I knew what it was like" because 'knew' is past tense, and thus, 'is' shouldn't be there.

I don't like being a grammar/spelling Nazi, but it's a poem, a work of english.

search for my other ones and then you'll know.

i like it

So do I.