Another poem. INSIDE A BODY OF GLASS

Inside a Body of Glass

I'm on the inside looking at you,
You don't even believe what you see of me,
Only so you think I'm alive,
I've been in my mind,
I have nothing to hide....,
They say I'm cured from myself,
But I can't say I'm over it,
I can't feel alive if I'm dead inside,
To many scars to count,
I wanna sleep so long to forget this all,
I have dug my own grave and I'm waiting,
You see I can not be saved,
I hide in my own complexity,
I still haven't shedded this pain,
I'm just tolerating you more,
Manipualting my way out,
The only thing I was taught right,
Can you smell the anger in me?,
You think you know me?,
Explain my explainations,
I'm only here because you believe I am,
Do you believe that or only wish to?
Your life and reality....,
Is it only what you wish to believe?.
What can you beLIEve???
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I wrote this after I got home from the hospital. I was comitted for slicing my wrists. More like shredding, gashing and stabbing them. I don't remember it though...Long Story anyways. Just tell me what you think of it. I'll quit posting my poems if you like. just be honest. I have plenty more I can post. Just lemme know. thanks.

Holy shit. :shock:
Amazing, and it really gets you thinking eh?
don't quit posting your poems.
They are awesome! :wink:

That, as usual, was awesome...

Don't stop posting your poems, they truly are amazing and tell a lot about yourself and you view on life

I also hope you can fight your demons and defeat them....

Quite slicing your wrists! :cry: Don't stop writing in the Forum.
That piece of work reminds me of a person who is ready to explode from the inside, but appears to everyone else to be fine. A person who needs an outlet. Like writing.

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Quite slicing your wrists! Don't stop writing in the Forum.[/b]

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I AGREE!


You seem to be able to express you're feelings well in writing. Hope it's enough. Happiness is often overlooked!
I enjoy reading your work...keep it coming.