Trapped in time, Im a particle in my head
I can't exist...I cant be dead
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Trapped in time, Im a particle in my head
I can't exist...I cant be dead
Hmmm... maybe call it "I Can't Be"... or is it called "no title" :P
its nto called anything. It has no title.
I would have called the poem a paradox. :wink:Quote:
Originally posted by gameover
its nto called anything. It has no title.
Well that is the feel of it. But until some title comes to me that I actually like, it has no title.
maybe the best thing would be to leave it untitled... cool little phrase though :wink:
It's more like a haiku than a poem.
Just off by three syllables, of course.
add
by (1 syllable) gameover (2 syllabels) to the end! Then you're done!