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      no title

      Trapped in time, Im a particle in my head
      I can't exist...I cant be dead
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      Hmmm... maybe call it "I Can't Be"... or is it called "no title"


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      its nto called anything. It has no title.
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      Originally posted by gameover
      its nto called anything. It has no title.
      I would have called the poem a paradox.
      Are you dreaming?

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      Well that is the feel of it. But until some title comes to me that I actually like, it has no title.
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      maybe the best thing would be to leave it untitled... cool little phrase though

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      It's more like a haiku than a poem.
      The best times of your life should not be when you're still so young, or else you'll live a life always dreaming of the past.


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      Just off by three syllables, of course.

      "In the end, the lord shalth return in full regulation Soviet Uniform, hailing Lenin as thy true messiah." -Siberian Revealations

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      add

      by (1 syllable) gameover (2 syllabels) to the end! Then you're done!

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