New Song - Vocalist Wanted

I don't do anything with lyrics. So if you can sing or even write lyrics, I wanna hear from you. I don't have anything particular in mind about the lyrics, so I'm open to anything. Even if you don't normally do anything for this kind of music, that only creates opportunity for something unique.

And otherwise enjoy the tunes :)

Here's the song I made: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/300744

Any comments/criticism welcome.

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Originally Posted by Vampyre

I don't do anything with lyrics. So if you can sing or even write lyrics, I wanna hear from you. I don't have anything particular in mind about the lyrics, so I'm open to anything. Even if you don't normally do anything for this kind of music, that only creates opportunity for something unique.

And otherwise enjoy the tunes :)

Here's the song I made: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/300744

Any comments/criticism welcome.

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I kinda like it, even though it's not my genre at all! =) What kind of singing do you have in mind..?

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Originally Posted by silkskinpaws

I kinda like it, even though it's not my genre at all! =) What kind of singing do you have in mind..?

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I don't have anything in mind for the lyrics/singing style. If you can sing and you're interested at all, then feel free to send me some of your work ( [email protected] ). I've heard good metal music with all kinds of different singers, so anything could work out well. Plus, it'd go along with the title "Hybrid."

Hello.

It was really good, especially when the clean guitar came in. The only problem I found was that some parts sounded out of time, so when you're recording without a drum track playing, make sure to use a metronome. I really did like it though.

Another thing is, if you don't have a singer, you could always record some kickass leads over it.

Awesome rhythm playing. Post more please. ^_^

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Originally Posted by AbstractAsylum

Hello.

It was really good, especially when the clean guitar came in. The only problem I found was that some parts sounded out of time, so when you're recording without a drum track playing, make sure to use a metronome. I really did like it though.

Another thing is, if you don't have a singer, you could always record some kickass leads over it.

Awesome rhythm playing. Post more please. ^_^

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I have some other songs uploaded, but they're not the same style at all. If you're interested, here are some links:

In Waiting - http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/140002
The Memories - http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/197362
Painting Clouds - http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/140162

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Originally Posted by Vampyre

I don't do anything with lyrics. So if you can sing or even write lyrics, I wanna hear from you. I don't have anything particular in mind about the lyrics, so I'm open to anything. Even if you don't normally do anything for this kind of music, that only creates opportunity for something unique.

And otherwise enjoy the tunes :)

Here's the song I made: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/300744

Any comments/criticism welcome.

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I actually listen to blues mainly,

but my advice would be:

the intro is a little long, and can get repetitive. maybe cut it from 46 seconds to 23 seconds

add a 2-3 second scream after 23 seconds
add a guitar solo after that clean guitar

from what little experience i have with metal music, thats all the insight i can offer you. the only real problem i had was the intro, the rest of the song stays interesting. good work

:D