Introduction: gentle revision
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Kromoh
Chapter 1: Introduction
Status: completed, to be revised
(version 1)
Starts with a lucid experience, and then mentions the basic concepts for lucid dreaming, such as dream recall, induction techniques, all with an enthusiastic approach.
Since no maintainer is listed, I'm posting my revision here, where [proposed] changes are to be posted. I've limited myself to correcting grammar / word selection where I think theres a clear need for improvement. I'd like to do more, but this seemed a good way to start. I'm happy to copy-edit other chapters/revisions in the same way.
I release these changes into the public domain (waiving copyright). That seems easier than trying to assign copyright to someone else when I don't even have any realnames :-). As a derived work the whole is of course only useable with the permission of the original author - whoever that is :-).
My revision of the introduction on Google Docs
To download as a Word file, click the "File" drop-down (on the Google Docs page, not the browser menu), and "Export as Word".