Thread: Song/poem: 'Changing the rules' (edited!!)

okay, i knocked this one up...but it took me ages...it didn't want to be written...

Who said you could change the rules?
and what about telling me,
if i matter so much?
are you sure that this is
how it's meant to be?

Why do you turn the tide?
and who said you could
give a damn besides?
why should you want to;
what happened to all your
foolish pride?

Where is she, when you're with me?
does she know that two
means three?
is she good, is she bad;
or am i the best thing,
that you never had?

That power you have,
Does it feel good?
Is it making you feel
how you think you should?
or is it a front, because you're
so scared;
I know you can't cope,
when i'm not there.

The way you push buttons
and pull on strings, making me
believe so many things.
The fact you know me like
the back of your hand.
These are the things
I don't understand.


Who said you could change the rules?
and what about telling me,
if i matter so much?
are you sure that this is
how it's meant to be?




written in response to an emotional dilemma, and thankyou to AmethystStar for her help with the first verse!

i want honest feedback on this one...no sugaring the pill, if it's crap, then tell me so!

Okay, Merck said i needed a couple more verses, so i've put them in. Let me know whether they make it better or worse!!