I have never been in love. |
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I am a, maybe what you could call a developing writer and I would love it if some of you could critique and edit some of my work. Now don't be too harsh please, keep in mind these are only rough drafts. Thank you and I really hope you like it or at least aren't too annoyed with it. |
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I have never been in love. |
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Insanity |
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Glass |
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Fake Trust |
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god? |
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Very nice, Shaelyn! Good emotion, though I would suggest working on shortening some sentences in "I Have Never Been In Love". Some are too long, and need better structuring. |
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Wow I really liked them, especially Insanity. They remind me of the philosophical wanderings that go on in my own mind lol. I don't believe in judging writing or music on what isn't there, people make what they want and put it on display so I'm not gonna tell you that you should have done this and that differently. I really like your thoughts and style. |
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My Hell |
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The five |
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Vacant |
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Again, very good! Also, moved to Artists' Corner where it belongs. I guess I didn't notice it wasn't there last night. No big deal. |
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Wow, its been awhile since I have posted anything here. Might as well add some of the recent. Warning: It seems I have digressed a tad. |
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Beat |
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Blessed Burden |
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