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      Longing

      Just an excerpt for my dozen sets of lyrics revolving somehow around lucid dreaming which I attribute to longing for more than you can have in this lifetime. Feel free to contact me if you liked it and you wish to check out the rest of my lyrical creations. For in whatsoever sophisticated and luxurious environment you may dwell in, once you begin thinking differently there is barely a return to reality, rationality. The experience, the atmosphere, and the involvement, serving as one of my trinity-principles, is all that matters.

      Your soul is not divine
      Your pride is not from hell
      You are set aside in fire
      Could freeze in ice as well
      Your soul is not aligned
      Your tribe is not ghost-shell
      You are set aflame in wire
      Could tease with lice as well
      Your soul is lost in mine
      Deep within my psycho-well
      Choking all what you desire
      What you are can no longer tell

      Farewell, spaceman
      Here comes chaotic blue
      Well-well, shaman
      Now your spirit's of dew
      You can not determine
      Just by the look in my eyes
      What is unnatural, vermine
      What's my truth, dearest lie

      You can't put your faith
      In the power within
      It's not yet too late
      You can undo the sin
      Don't block me from the darkness
      Oh, let me see the light
      Balance me in starkness
      Would make me feel all right

      You can't pick a fight
      With the power within
      You can't make it right
      Cuz you already sinned
      Empower me with darkness
      And feed me with delight
      Make the lightrays harmless
      And revel in the night

      Come Revel in the night
      Home Rebel with delight
      An ash in the astray
      A flame on a burning tree
      Abashed light's stray
      Finally we're breaking free

      My flower, my flower
      You're the one chilling my night
      Mayflower, mayflower
      You are the one bringing delight
      All right... awake, alight
      My flower, my flower
      You are setting the skies aflame
      Mayflower, mayflower
      You believe that love's just a game
      Such a shame...none to blame

      Stare into the void wide-eyed
      Can not avoid all those lies
      Ideas lurking in the shadows
      Memories appear out of the blue
      It's way too hard to describe
      The secrets of all dreams

      It is here, it is now
      Live for tomorrow
      Erase past sorrows
      Bliss is to be allowed

      No souls left divine
      The world's now such a shame
      Walk into the fire
      Put yourself on the blame
      Sail into the sunset
      Deliver a new day
      Fulfill your desire
      Set the world aflame
      Why not mix the wire?
      For life is just a game
      A sunrise in the night
      will set the world aflame

      We're only pawns
      of the demons' spawns
      We mow their lawns
      And obey their laws
      Why do we conform
      We get only weaker
      False-security comfort
      Of truth and light-seekers

      The war has begun
      Don't have any regrets
      Don't drop your gun
      The more you whine
      The harder it gets
      Let it be all thine

      You are an enemy of god
      Not a part of any system
      You got no belongings
      Yet there's so much that you take
      No limits to what you can do
      You create your own frames
      A broken rebel, fallen angel
      Who sets the world aflame

      While anyone but you is someone
      You are nobody, yet everybody
      You don't have an identity
      A real name, nor an alibi
      Yet you can become anyone
      You can make yourself undone

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      cliché [klee-shey, kli-] cli·ché
      noun
      1. a trite, stereotyped expression; a sentence or phrase, usually expressing a popular or common thought or idea, that has lost originality, ingenuity, and impact by long overuse, as sadder but wiser, or strong as an ox.

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      My creations are anything but clichés. You seem to make no sense at all to me, or, as another permutation, judging from the nature of the posts you possess so far and the four-lined meaningless verse I stumbled upon, you contend to be superficial which I can only confirm and you profoundly fail to appreciate the blooming beauty and value of a lyrics or any other type of work of art in general. I am not saying anything on this forum is a state-of-art, nevertheless NOT bullsh...
      I do appreciate the "comment", or the attention, the "pseudo-criticism" anyway.

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      Cliche might not be the right word, but simple and boring in regards to rhyme scheme and depiction definitely come to mind for me. If you hit for power to right field, don't try hitting over the Green Monster at Fenway. That is what you are attempting, Atlas.

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      I won't pick a fight on your excessive stupidity and apparent conformism, overly conforming attitude, sorry... Let's see who laughs at the end, I can assure that both of you are gonna go under and go out of fashion with your primitive, ascetic techniques pretty soon. The time will come, individually. Even if you are one of them, you must not reveal who you are.. yet. Concealing your identity is crucial, and is risky, the powers you contain may be dangerous for others and even for yourself if it gets out of control. But if you fail to accept the fact that there is more than meets the eye, you are absolutely, profoundly helpless. The lack of insight and delusions I sense in you is catastrophic. Your meaningless, preoccupied attachment to planet earth A, conforming to its pseudo-problems and lowly delights. A pain in your unknowing arse, facing the unknown energies vibrating through. Devastating, lethal for some, I must remark. You are not forced to be a part of it in any means. Just survive. There is a reason you were born here. Another reason is the available resources, environments which make you think. Every single experience is a fragment of you, collectively designing, defining your true inner self, who and what you are, you must not reject any of it, and they subconsciously design the path ahead that you are about to take. You are just an incarnated soul dwelling on Earth in this lifetime, but not earthbound, but it does not mean that you have to suffer, if anything is to happen. Being different is always a greater feeling than sticking to the standards, living each day according to a schedule prepared both physically, mentally and spiritually. Eating, dreaming, thinking the same things each damn day, with no new and revolutionary ideas potentially coming across your mind at all.. It is simply because you don't let your superior self possessing you. You reject it, keep it as far away as possible, choking deep down in your bodily grave. I even wonder what keeps it alive, such an ignorant being like the vast majority.. The only thing I can think about external support, universal feed. An extra job for your so-called spirit-guides, guardian angels and so on, call it what you will. That's why they are fed up with you and do not wanna help anymore, no matter how deeply you may believe in a deity... on the verge of exhaustion, disgust, and terrible boredom caused only by incurable ignorance. You got your resources, just as much as you need in this lifetime, just as I do and everyone else, to embark on your quest and arise from the depths. Almost everyone starts from de profundis, with a few exceptions that I don't wish to detail any further. By time, you will realize the weight of this, I do not wanna spoil your individual quest. Just giving a friendly advice. Take a path which has no feature, thus it can't be right nor wrong. The whole system is collapsing soon anyway. If you think totally the opposite, then for you, I emphasize only for you, it will happen, regardless of what I say. But you won't be able to ignore the obvious that is gonna happen Earth-wide. The process of cleansing and catastrophes has begun. You are your own paradise, your own creator. You are not bound by anyone entirely, even if they help very much or be it your boss. You are your own fountain. I don't expect you to shift your ideology right away or I wonder if you ever choose to at all, but would be glad if you meditated on it a little bit. But such a talent like you leading to waste is honestly such a pity to hear. Both of you are overgeneralizing yourself by suppressing yourselves from your own potentials. And then there you are, conforming the BS, it is an argument about to begin not worth being involved with. Don't let negative forces lead you astray, don't let you be tempted by it all the time only on occasions you feel it necessary, you are more powerful than it, since you have something more it doesn't.
      Last edited by EnigmaticSparkX; 06-11-2012 at 10:18 AM.

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