The Nazi

[Fetish]

This is storie i just had floating around my head. Most of it true but some of it is overexagerated. but there is one problem I cant think of anyway to end it. I'd appricate some Idea's if your willing to give out any. and thank you . The Nazi In the 1920s there was an uprising of a new political power. Nazism or Nazi which is short for National Socialist in the German language. Nazi's believed that Aryans were superior to any other race. This new belief was brought on by a man named Adolph Hitler. This man was mainly responsible for the death of hundreds of thousands of people. Eventually he and a large part of his followers were abolished. Since then there has been no Nazi State although there are still many Neo-Nazis. I tell you this because I realize there is a new National Socialist group that is hiding within a larger and more powerful group. They are hiding within the Christian community. By saying this I do not mean that ALL Christians are part of this group. In fact I am a Christian but I still cant turn a blind eye to what my fellow "believers" are doing and saying. Justin grabbed his bible and walked into the Youth Group's congregation area. His teacher was on another rant about how all liberals were plotting to take over the government and all the evils they commit. Justin sighed and sat down between Cynthia and Jessie, The two most opened minded and intelligent girl's in the church. After exchanging there silent nods to show welcome the Teacher started the lesson. "To day class we are going to watch a DVD on George W. Bush" Said the Teacher" And how important it is to have Brother in Faith in the White House" He started the documentary. The narrator was like every other one that Justin had ever heard unenthusiastic, bland and loud. After several minutes of watching that consisting of the acronym F.R.O.G (Forever Rely On God) there was a segment George Bush senior. It told how he was tempted sexually by a young democrat for several seconds before he yelled at her to go away. greatly upsetting her. Justin couldn't help but laugh which got him a stern look from the teacher. "That's ridicules " He thought to him self "If I had a wife as ugly as his I would try and get sex where ever I could" He couldn't help but smile at his little joke. At this point the Teacher stopped the DVD and started on another little monologue about the unclean Liberals. At this point Justin zoned out. It seemed pointless to argue with Teacher since he will always keep the same views. several weeks later Justin started school again. After the usual greetings of "I missed you so much " and "what an awesome tan" he saw a student that he knew wearing a shirt that had some generic message about God. He wasn't sure how he felt but it soon slipped from his mind as he saw some friends he had not talk to yet. "Hola senorita Diablo. " Justin said grinning at a tall brown haired girl "Fuck off peon. " She said while smacking him in the back of his head He winced and continued "I forgot how much that hurt, so what did i do to make you mad this time Emily? " "existed. " "well there's not much I can do about that now can I ? " "Suicide." Emily replied as if she was suggesting a place to go eat dinner. "anyway you stopped writing story's for me to beta write you bastard " "right sorry about that, I've got a few ideas I'll write them down and email them to you " Next Sunday Justin was back with the youth group listening to the Teacher with only half interest. "Next week there will be a debate " This caught Justin's attention "It will be about homosexuality. Now i want to you all to choose sides saying if its something you choose or something your born with " With a murmur of excitement the class broke into two groups. Not so surprisingly the group that thought sexuality was something you were born with was extremely small. It had only Justin, Jessie and Cynthia. Seeing this the Teacher forced some students to move over with them. "In my opinion all gay people should be shot in the head" say the teacher calmly. But Justin was fighting the urge to stand up and curse out the teacher. Only one other person seemed to be reacting to that statement and that was Alisha a smart blonde girl. "Oh my God that was mean " she told Teacher "I have gay friends" Justin was shocked at how lightly she was taking what he said. Later that evening Justin was beating himself up inside for not saying anything to the Teacher. The lunch bell rang on Tuesday signaling the students to crowd into the cafeteria to eat what ever was shoveled on to their trays. He didn't get anything it all looked nasty to him. Walking back over to the table where all of his friends were sitting. The boy that was wearing a Christian shirt was there again. Joking Justin threaten to smack Emily if she didn't give him a piece of her sandwich. The T-shirt boy got offended somehow and stood up. "What did you say ?" He said as if just but scolding Justin he would exert some type of power over him. Justin blinked not sure what what to think "You better not say anything like that again." He said sitting down as if he won some terrific battle. Emily laughed knowing Justin wouldn't do or say anything to the boy mainly because he was pacifist but also because he was so shocked so what just happened. Several days later Justin was walking down the stairs with Emily having a semi-normal conversation. "you know what the T-shirt boy said to me, Peon ?" she said "Do I look telepathic to you ?" "He was talking about how he hates all gays " She said laughing. Emily found a lot of Christian beliefs foolish and pointless Justin tensed remembering what Teacher said last Sunday. He wasn't about to let this slide by. Fuck being a pacifist he thought. At lunch time Justin edged the T-shirt boy on until he snapped. "You an evil sinner" the boy said think that he could beat down just with words like last time. But this time Justin was prepared "And your a homo phobic moron " Justin retorted "Bastard " "Nazi " Justin had really made him mad with that. The T-shirt boy stood up and with his hands curled into fist. Justin stood up too not about to be beat down by such a disgrace to humanity. The lunch table began to chant. "FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT " "Do you want me to hit you ?" said the boy rage in his voice "Is that the Christian way ?" Justin said calmly know his tone of voice will upset the boy more than any words. "Is there a problem here boys ? " said a deep voice. They both turned to see who it was. There eyes met the body of there History teacher "No Sir" Justin said quickly sitting down and the now silent table the Nazi/T-shirt boy followed suit "That's good boys, I don't want to have to send you to the office. " He walked off to patrol the rest of the cafeteria. ack and that is where it stops

[Fetish]

ack will someone please tell me what you think of this story, do you hate it, love it, or just dont get it. ANY of your thoughts will be a great help !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Joseph_Stalin]

You've definately got some short-story magic going on there. With some dialogue and grammar clean up it would be gold. The mood of the story is actually very surreal, and I actually thinking ending the story around there would leave an odd eerieness in people's minds (maybe a sentence or two more after that). Then again, it's up to you where this is going to go. Good job.

[Fetish]

Thank you Joe that really helped more than you can think. I'll take your views and tweak my story with them I might even right a story with communisim in it : -]