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    1. 07-31-2006 08:06 AM #1
      HgSilver
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      Destitute nation,
      fallen from grace;

      Influential power,
      needs to save face;

      Ideal opponents,
      already traced.

      Destitute nation,
      fallen from grace;

      Globalized deviant,
      terminal force;

      Dis-like minded foes,
      derailed the course;

      Global consciousness,
      is not the source;

      Crowded inferno,
      no need for grace.

      I do not understand why babbling idiots post "poetry" on the internet but like a pathetic conformist living in such a globalized world I decided to post my insult to literature.
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    2. 07-31-2006 11:40 AM #2
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      I like it

      I think "Ideal opponents, already traced" is funny.


      First WILD on 6th of August, 2006!
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    3. 08-01-2006 12:17 AM #3
      HgSilver
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      For some unexplainable reason I felt like following some sort of pattern, which I did. I followed a numerical syllable pattern, part of the reason can be attributed to my boredom at the time.
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