Alright. Well, I've written one novel before, and I strive to do it again, but for some reason, I guess I've just never been able to get very far with it. However, this I'm hoping to be a well-worked out idea before I start so that it can be written well.
I have the concept of what I want in the novel down. I currently don't have any story points yet (for example, no character concepts for the protagonist or antagonist and no real solid plot points), but that will come with time. I'll probably update this thread as I begin outlining the plot and then as I begin writing and what not.
Anyways, enough of the set-up. I'd appreciate as much harsh criticism as you want to dish out. If you think it sucks, tell me! Don't worry, you will absolutely not hurt my feelings. I want as harsh as you can possibly dish out (while still being comprehensible and constructive, that is ).
So, here's the concept, setting, and very rough outline of what's going down in the story:
It's a futuristic social satire (a la George Orwell's 1984), meant to hopefully draw out the ridiculousness of the extremist religious AND extremist atheistic views. For reference, I myself am an atheist (it perhaps would be necessary to point that out to portray exactly where I'm coming from here).
The story will take place in a (at least as of now) indefinite place in the future. There is a worldwide governing body (as in each country has a locational government as states have governments, but there is a centralized federal government of the world, unliked today's United Nations), and it is very atheistic.
The government basically rejects faith in all forms. If you are aware of either of the writers/atheist activists Richard Dawkins or Sam Harris (writers of, respectively The God Delusion and Letter to a Christian Nation), this might make more sense. They reject those who believe in God, but also those who have faith in any religion. Obviously, this is the extremist atheism. But it's to the point where there is hardly any fidelity at all anymore.
There are no marriages (not that they aren't allowed, just uncommon due to mistrust), most children are only bastardized, and probably not accepted by the mother (but of course, the mother doesn't trust any doctor to give her an abortion). There is very low education, and everyone is so incredibly paranoid of trusting anyone that it's almost complete chaos.
But of course there's still the government. They retain control (kind of), but obviously a democracy would crumble within seconds of its existence, and the government is just an oligarchy, but even that is highly unstable, and those who hold power only do until they are smart enough to quit or are assassinated by those who lust for their jobs.
Now, this brings us to the other side. Of course, there are rebels, who dislike the government (don't stop here, it's not that cheesy). They are religious extremists, and belong to the "cult of God." This is pretty highly Christian, but is inclusive of all monotheistic religions (Hinduism and other polytheistic religions sort of trailed off and got assimilated eventually). This cult, though is mostly following the teachings of texts such as the old testament, which was largely violent and horribly sacrificial. Thus they are hardly any better than the government itself. They are active in their promotion of God, but choose to do it in a horribly bloody way, and are basically just bloodlusting people, but who are "righteous" because they follow God.
The atheistic government basically deals with these people by torturing them until they crack and give into atheistic beliefs (or at least are broken enough to shut up about their own beliefs).
So as you can see, neither side is very...nice...
Well, this is where the story begins. A new "cult" of rebels grows, this one being atheistic, but inclusive and trusting, referring to other members as brothers and sisters of faith and they are actually the first in a long while to actually have something formed like this, seeing as most people choose to follow the government in their entire lack of fidelity. The government begins by overlooking these people, seeing as they really don't care about what clubs are formed as long as they are atheistic, but soon the government is keeping a watchful eye on them, and begins feeling threatened. This group of faithful-yet-atheistic "happy mediumers" are actually accomplishing FAR more than the government could hope to in their chaotic state, seeing as nobody in the government can actually bother liking each other.
Eventually, this group strives to take control, works on sedating the cult of God, and actually performs a successful preach to the cult, after some tribulation, and they basically tell the cult that what they're doing isn't any better, but that they should find sort of that happy medium, where they don't have to bother killing a bunch of people to get their way.
Now, the government jumps at this chance. They notice that the group of atheists has just approved of faith, and use this to lunge at them politically. Eventually, this leads into an unnecessary battle and a large amount of the group is slaughtered mercilessly, because they refuse to stoop to the level of the government. But in the middle of the battle, something happens, and there's a ton of confusion, because different people vying for power see their chance to lunge into a higher power.
In seemingly a split second, the second-in-command is turned against, the seargants are killed off, and basically the pyramid tumbles as was obviously expected by such an uneasy unstable governmental system. The higher powers try to defend themselves as they start being assassinated by the lower power, and basically everything falls apart pretty fast, and eventually the group takes power as the new worldwide government, explaining to the public their views, and it's generally well-received. There's a lot of crap for them to clean up, but they're up to the task.
So...Sorry for the extensive post. What do you guys think about this, though?
~D-Draw
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