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      Cosmos

      I guess it's safe to say I'm not the
      only
      one
      looking
      up
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      Lions of Nyabingi


      stones in darkers forward Zion turn
      star so hot make I and I burn
      our bredren, our sistren
      Red.
      man and beast, a kingdom established
      Babylon step fi da flame of da chalice
      no time fi be vexin'
      Red.
      I ignorant strap'd wit' more dan teeth
      Jah knows I wrap'd wit' sore an' grief
      but still comes first light
      Sight?
      be no fear of da fearful loathing
      for it seems only days since I plant stop growing
      feel no way, 'tis but a word
      Seen?

      ...Rasta, sit down wit' ya sun and ya skins
      forget da bald heads, Bandulus and sins...

      ...think pon ya gates and da heavenly stars
      whole heap of dem wolves can't see past dere yards...

      ...tings all I rey, da I ly smoke fi Zion
      who said sheep can't turn into dem Lions...

      ...until dat moment, youth, keep on dis glove
      for da bad flames burn like a star; One Love.
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      Those Big Marshmallows up in the Sky


      They look so soft,
      oh, how I would love to touch,
      but nothingness is never enough.
      Always wandering and lost.


      Gentle creatures,
      the simple mind plays visionary
      with beanstalks and turtles eating berries;
      pure white zebras.


      They look at peace,
      forming the masterful mythical heavens,
      but only they know - the true number sevens.
      Like wool, or like fleece.


      The shapeshifters,
      expanding to the fuel of human fire,
      let it rain black with human desire;
      our ash filters.


      They look disturbed,
      regardless of their feathered mass,
      terrified, terrified, letting no light pass.
      Not another word.


      Horsemen, nightriders,
      signifying the end of the world diseased,
      wet with the passion of a woman unpleased;
      the flames grow higher!


      ...where did they go?
      I once saw them in the playground up high,
      those funny big marshmallows up in the sky.
      They'll be back, this I know.




      Those bipolar big marshmallows up in the sky.
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      How Many?

      In the world's world...



      How many sirens will sound in the night?
      How many children are taken on sight?
      How many tears are being shed like snakes skin?
      How many wars will be fought - who will win?
      How many people are dying in sheets?
      How many people are rats of the street?
      How much potential is going to waste?
      How many people are lost in sore taste?

      How many sounds are going unheard?
      How many students are forgetting their words?
      How many drugs are flooding our fields?
      How many colours are found - who will yield?
      How many minds are mashed into dirt?
      How much is insanity and what is it worth?
      How many Gods live beyond our stars?
      How many roads are simply too far?

      In a world's world.
      Still smiling.

      How many youth see to their first kiss?
      How many smiles are curving closed lips?
      How many ants climb to the top of the hill?
      How many steps have been - who ever stands still?
      How many woman are turned into mothers?
      How are you my friends, sisters and brothers?
      How many souls are so perfectly matched?
      How many memories grow on the flats?

      In a world turned on its shoulders.
      Always smiling.
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      Just noticed how many views I actually have on this thread...

      Thought I would thank my invisible audience for following me along. I know you're all out there. Hopefully my poetry has opened some minds and provided some new questions - and if it hasn't, may there be a similar influence somewhere along the paved lines.
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      Quote Originally Posted by CoLd BlooDed View Post
      Just noticed how many views I actually have on this thread...

      Thought I would thank my invisible audience for following me along. I know you're all out there. Hopefully my poetry has opened some minds and provided some new questions - and if it hasn't, may there be a similar influence somewhere along the paved lines.
      It has <:

      I hate commenting on the good stuff, ClouD's writing, your poetry, Carousoul's art~

      It's all amazing, all of it. I just can't find the right words to compliment them

      Maybe one day I'll actually be good at putting words together. So thank you, and keep it up. :]

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      Maybe Cloud, Carousol and myself should do a poetry/art/writing compilation...

      Many sincere thanks, by the way, it truly means a lot. And I can understand where you're coming from. Sometimes it's difficult to try and say what you want to say when commenting on an artform... because you have to be able to speak in the particular artform.

      Keep reading, keep thinkin'.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
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      On the Hillside


      On the hillside, minds innocently running, bodies parallel to the blanketed stars. Smiling, pointing with our elderly fingers to a multitude of caricatures - forms constantly changing to match our resonance. Our frequencies. But isn't that just it?

      It's as if they're only there to acquire us. Existing not as true beings but like pseudo-opaque, two-dimensional paint stains barring us from the light. Yet we acknowledge them anyways, even going so far as to identify them with things of the past. Phantoms on center stage, acting out in an invisible play.

      On the outside, like scientists prodding over a microscope, like therapists peering through a padded cell window, we look bacterial - we look crazy. Acknowledging the non-existent on the hillside. On the hillside, we are normal and everyone on the outside is crazy.

      We are the scientists, psychologists, and leaders of the occult. We are normal. We are conspirators, presidents, and Gods. We are normal. We are children, we are adults, we are everything in between. We are normal.

      On the hillside, we look at vapors and laugh at their resemblance, even though it's a trick of the mind. Nobody will ever see their True Form, not even those who already know. Questions rush to mind... if they simply exist as frequency matchups, do they exist at all? What does that say about us?

      We are... normal.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      A Tribute to Dionysius, the Hellfire of the '60s - Part I

      the cute girl sitting outside the bar
      underage & mother deceased
      neon glow casting pale
      beauty
      in summer night.

      the man behind black-rimmed glasses
      genius & incredibly fucked up
      oft misunderstood w/tales untold
      beautiful
      in the bathroom mirror.

      the elderly asleep on retail couches
      withdrawn w/life trauma
      insightful & wiser than anything, yet
      beauty
      in dreamscapes.

      not something
      you could ever
      know without
      already knowing.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      Quote Originally Posted by no-name View Post
      It has <:

      I hate commenting on the good stuff, ClouD's writing, your poetry, Carousoul's art~

      It's all amazing, all of it. I just can't find the right words to compliment them

      Maybe one day I'll actually be good at putting words together. So thank you, and keep it up. :]
      That's how I feel.

      I don't want to look like a dick and say "Cool, man" every time.
      Cause TBH I'm kinda gay for your poetry.

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      Haha, don't worry, I completely understand... except the bit about being gay for my poetry. As in what, inferior? I appreciate all feedback and no feedback, friend - I am indifferent. But thank you for being part of my invisible audience.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
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      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      You have some very unique poetry that makes me smile,
      It's rather easy to say that I quite like your style,
      And when reading these kindered words on a screen,
      I find your poetry has made it's own scene.

      But seriously I like the depth, the descriptions and the perspective you put into your writing.
      I can stand brute force, but brute reason is quite unbearable. There is something unfair about its use. It is hitting below the intellect.~Oscar Wilde

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      Quote Originally Posted by CoLd BlooDed View Post
      Haha, don't worry, I completely understand... except the bit about being gay for my poetry. As in what, inferior?
      Naw I mean I really like it.

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      I must say I really liked 'How Many?'
      especially this part of it:


      Quote Originally Posted by CoLd BlooDed
      How many minds are mashed into dirt?
      How much is insanity and what is it worth?
      How many Gods live beyond our stars?
      How many roads are simply too far?
      Really great stuff man, as always.





      Quote Originally Posted by Elis D.
      I don't want to look like a dick and say "Cool, man" every time.
      Cause TBH I'm kinda gay for your poetry.
      And I must say, that just made my night.
      They say life's about choices;
      In the face of defeat, I decline.
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      Thanks, LSS. I can provide the explanation for that one if you'd like. It's pretty straightforward. And appreciated, Elis.
      _____________

      You there, yes. You.
      I can see.

      Pick up the phone, intergalactic calling you at home from another planet,
      No dial tone? Maybe you're just spaced out like acid.
      No need for racket simply ask and thou shall receive that
      all wrapped up like a diseased rat in quarantined plastic.
      Cool drastic, mentally trapped at the bottom of the waste basket, you're like trash kid,
      tripped for three, the epit-o-me of neuron blastin fooled you into burning cash
      faster than a match lit.

      To be continued.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      Looking forward to what tonight brings forth my friend. Have fun, and be safe.

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      Some jams me and my buddy did last night.

      The Freestyle Jam

      Singing


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      I love the poems, the rasta one is one of the best I've ever read

      The singing/freestyle jams are raw but entertaining and I love the melodies!

      Keep it up

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      A Tribute to Dionysius, the Hellfire of the '60s - Part II

      To think I truly forgot
      what this is—a lie
      & to think I understand
      is a myth

      finding it increasingly difficult
      to keep this pen in my hands
      followed with words I
      couldn't possibly
      understand.

      Irrational; irresponsible,
      no focus w/extra focus
      & thoughts dribble from tongue

      doing my best to keep my
      spirits alive, in another
      world I would
      have
      died.

      problems & complexities
      people w/ personalities
      forever entwined.

      associate with morning breeze
      thru parks bench and ocean beach
      a synonymous greeting of
      affection caressing
      your every curve.

      It's always busy.
      always.
      something that shakes me to my center core
      something that fills me with uncertain
      flavour
      something
      something that
      always.
      It's never quiet.

      lost a father to brainwash
      mirroring myself unto
      his fucking fate.

      (a single penned line scribbled, capturing seven minutes of
      Riders on the Storm.)





      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      Although I only read a few of these, they are very well written. Keep up the good work.

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      Thanks Exhalent, your feedback is appreciated.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      Freedome

      Free me from filth,
      from rock, from silt
      Free me from sin,
      from stone and from guilt
      Looking outward to hills
      where the house has
      been built

      Give me a star, a moon,
      and sand.

      Free me from pain,
      from disease, from strain
      Free me from plague,
      from age and from game
      Looking up to the sky
      where the waxing
      moon wanes

      Give me a pen, a pad,
      and a brain.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      Hierarchy of Earth and Stars



      There's a reason why we are here...
      we are based off senses.

      Humans,
      thought.

      Dogs,
      smell.

      Bats,
      sound.

      And still,
      dirt.
      Last edited by CoLd BlooDed; 07-30-2009 at 05:17 AM.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
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      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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      CB.. I really liked Freedome.. a lot.

      But I gotta ask you about "Where the waxing moon wanes".

      Was the apparent contradiction in those words intended?

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      Yeah, it was intended. In this poem, the house is me. The waxing moon is me.

      Thank you.


      Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
      Look out on a summers day,
      with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.


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