Get a lyricist. |
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lyrics I wrote for my band |
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i'll be cured like a junkie with a methadone addiction thinks he's clean, i'll be cured.
Get a lyricist. |
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Hmm, I always thought of myself more a lyricist than an overall musician. I guess I forget that metaphors to myself appear as gibberish to others. I always liked how in writing, the reader can make anything they want of it. It's not always about how the writer intends it. It's what everyone can take from it in different ways. |
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i'll be cured like a junkie with a methadone addiction thinks he's clean, i'll be cured.
Hello generic hair. I just luvvv your generic music. |
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We play what we like. What is wrong with that? |
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i'll be cured like a junkie with a methadone addiction thinks he's clean, i'll be cured.
Nothing. Nothing. |
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I retract this comment. I will not have a go at writing lyrics to that. |
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Last edited by Identity X; 11-05-2007 at 11:52 PM.
*watches someone's dreams torn apart and eaten by Identity X...wishes there was something he could do to help...gives up, looks for spare change* |
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As someone who doesn't mind this kinda music (I love Underoath), I can give an unbiased description of why it doesn't sound good, and not just telling you straight out like Identity. |
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Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
Look out on a summers day,
with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.
Yeah, this. I know nothing of music, so I couldn't say why it sounded bad. Thanks for the clarification. |
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Thanks ColdBlooded. |
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i'll be cured like a junkie with a methadone addiction thinks he's clean, i'll be cured.
I think it's just swell! |
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Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
Look out on a summers day,
with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.
Seconded. |
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It's screamo, not metal. Big difference, hahah. (Yes, I'm aware you admitted your musical ignorance, I just thought it was funny ) |
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Starry starry night, paint your pallet blue and gray,
Look out on a summers day,
with eyes that know the darkness of my soul.
Uh, I enjoy music, I listen to it a lot, pretty much any time I can. I buy albums. Of course I should be allowed to dish out criticism. |
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Last edited by Identity X; 11-06-2007 at 01:07 PM.
I'll have to go with Identity X on this one but go a step further. |
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Last edited by Merlock; 11-06-2007 at 01:23 PM.
Well, here's to my blindness and/or unattentiveness. I had deduced everything below the first line was his signature...didn't even bother reading. Ah, my impatience will be the death of me. |
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I usually wouldn't be bothered by criticism, but this: |
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i'll be cured like a junkie with a methadone addiction thinks he's clean, i'll be cured.
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Last edited by Carôusoul; 11-06-2007 at 03:06 PM.
/me breaks down and cries. |
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You merely have to change your point of view slightly, and then that glass will sparkle when it reflects the light.
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