Tell me what you think, I'm going to make a thread with some older poetry, but this is my newest poem, just wrote it today.

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Pandora’s Playground

Strong winds make the grass shiver,
Ripple the water as a leaf lands lightly.
Moonlight reflects light off the river,
And the fluorescent fireflies scatter brightly.
Stars above transcend wisdom as they mirror
The dream world with their ghostly outlined design.
Clouds cover the night sky, all becomes clearer
As rain trickles smoothly as if a fine red wine.
Rinsing away the sinister, malevolent aura
Enshrouding the dim, bloodstained blade
Entrapped in the mangled moon Pandora,
Resting in the lake that striking Maid.
The clouds clear, her shadow disappears,
Laughing above, the starry puppeteers.