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      Is it a deal?

      edit: I switch up the rhyme pattern a couple times... and some of the timing takes a bit to get, but it works.

      A warm and quiet autumn day
      orange and yellow in the sun's rays
      When an angry being, far below
      sent up it's creatures, and now will show
      Angels, ghosts, and deadly things
      Vengence and justice they will bring
      For judgement day is here at last
      considering the sins that passed

      Sky has darkened
      your time is done
      don't be disheartened
      for hell may shun
      your righteous deeds
      and godly ways
      might save you from
      the devils maze
      of decay
      of agony
      and of pure loss.

      But ho'
      a final test awaits
      Will you suceed
      or take the bait?

      For satan rises from his throne
      to issue you a final pledge
      Eternity with death and bones
      If you agree to climb the ledge
      To servitude for ever more
      To satan and his massive hordes
      Spared from the pain of body and mind
      You just must sign, and your soul bind

      "So it's a deal?" The devil asked
      "Regardless of your tattered past
      I will accept you as you are
      and free you from this tyrant's bars.
      For the god you love does not love you,
      he loves the power and the new
      souls that he takes up to his land
      to wallow under his opressive hand.
      For I was too, a man of god
      Who followed every single law.
      But then one day I saw the truth
      of god and his restrictive noose
      which tightens 'round the mortal man
      and drags him to his onerous land.
      But I, however, am a better choice
      as I give my whole legion a voice
      and listen very closely to
      what they want for me to do.
      One more time, I'll ask again.
      Is it a deal?
      Last edited by mindwanderer; 10-14-2010 at 12:13 AM.

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